dw - wonderland (1/2)
Title: Wonderland (1/2)
Rating: T
Characters: Ten/Rose, Jack Harkness, Martha Jones
Summary: Sequel to Down the Rabbit Hole, and What She Found There. An AU of sorts for Alice in Wonderland, TIP/SP and the rest of series 3 and 4. Written for the brilliant, talented, and all around amazing Lindsay (nylana ) for her birthday a month ago. And so, a very ( Read more... )
Rating: T
Characters: Ten/Rose, Jack Harkness, Martha Jones
Summary: Sequel to Down the Rabbit Hole, and What She Found There. An AU of sorts for Alice in Wonderland, TIP/SP and the rest of series 3 and 4. Written for the brilliant, talented, and all around amazing Lindsay (nylana ) for her birthday a month ago. And so, a very ( Read more... )
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There’s even less rest for him, these days.
It all seems a bit too presumptive, too idyllic to be true, but maybe that’s because he’s only good in a disaster.
Right off the bat there's this sense of imbalance and tension and unease. You know something is wrong and it sets the perfect eerie tone for the rest of the fic. That last line is just soooo scarily true. It really seems like the Doctor gets no rest, that his only purpose is sorting out disaster.
“Did she leave because you changed? Did she prefer the ridiculous ears to your ugly mug?”
This is tremendous. The symbolism of the wolves (I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE) and the Doctor ordering them away, but even as he does they taunt him. HAVE I MENTIONED HOW AMAZING YOU ARE YET?
The tea goes cold very quickly that ( ... )
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(I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE)
:D I love being able to write in bits of symbolism and Easter eggs into fic, and having someone point them out! And nine times out of ten it's always you, 'cause you're just amazing like that, bb ♥.
TEA IS APPARENTLY VERY POWERFUL STUFF.
'Tis! I am currently living off entire kettles of this stuff myself XD. I was a bit of a casual tea drinker before I got to the UK, but now, man, I have so much of it. I fully expect to metamorphose into a bag of English Breakfast any day now, lol.
I THINK YOU KNOW OF MY ADORATION FOR JACK AS THE CHESHIRE CAT SO I'LL JUST LEAVE THIS HERE.
YAAAY. OH, HURRAY ♥. It's the smile, definitely :).
It just hangs there like a phantom and you know something's coming.
Teehee. I feel like such a dreadful tease these days ;).
DONNA UP IN THIS WONDERLAND, WUT?
BAHAHA. And oh, the plans I have in store for her. *steeples fingers* *glances at above comment*
WHERE IS PART 2??? I MUST ( ... )
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You are wonderful and so kind, bb. ILU ♥.
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This is *gorgeous,* and heartbreaking, and clever, and ohhhhhh I've missed your words.
Aristotle had his planetary orbits, Euclid his geometry, Plato his paradigms on perfection, but these long-dead Greeks know nothing about the way she keeps taking his hand, and how the math might be wrong but it’s circular, it is - this trust and love and fascination, extending from her to him to her forever and ever, their lives already blended together by sacrifice and tea time conversation.
Per. Fec. Tion.
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Your flow of words is simply breath taking. I love this wonderland of yours!
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Ohh, thank you so, so much, darling! I'm so happy you liked it :).
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Its just so friggin perfect. Jack the Cheshire?! YES. The Doctor is voiced to perfection, as is the lingering feel of Rose. Just...so...
YES.
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