dw - a trail left of broken statues and ruin

[momentmusical]

 

Comments

[amberfocus]

Wow. Lovely. Lyrical. Beautiful. Then whammo with the angst there in the last three lines. Very effective piece. I loved it.

[momentmusical]

Thank you so much ♥.

[momentmusical]

Thank you! :D

[sapphire_child]

OH. This was so lovely but what a sucker punch at the end! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful job.

[momentmusical]

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you, thank you, thank you ♥.

[rosewarren]

Oh, that was so beautiful. I loved all the ways and places they were together.

This especially: Just like that, she glows as brightly as the sun (and here he curses his imagination for being so vivid and wishful and his memory for being so retentive across minds and bodies).

And as the OP have said, that last line just kills me.

[momentmusical]

Thank you so much! Thinking up the situations I can put them in is a lot of fun :). I'm really glad you liked it!

[helygen]

This is stunning. It's very lyrical and dreamlike, and the language of it is beautiful

[momentmusical]

Thank you ♥!