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Chapter 13

Buffy surveyed the situation, blinking rapidly as Ethan entered the room flanked by what appeared to be at least 20 strong men.

“GOD!” she blurted in frustration. “Seriously, why do you hate me? I mean, being the chosen one wasn’t enough? Why do I never ONCE get the opportunity to have anyone believe for, I don’t know, twenty seconds

Comments

[redscorner]

What the...? How...?

Dammit woman! How could you end it there? You're never allowed to bitch at me for cliffhangers ever again.

Love this, as usual.

[terilyn4]

the kids are dead??? oh you are so mean lol. I'm with Red, I hate cliffhangers. update soon please.

[imthephonograph]

All this angsty, cliffhangery goodness. really convinces me you're a definate b/a writer at heart.
There best be a happily ever after after all that you've put them through.

I love it. keep it up!

[raintree85]

hey i just read this little gem of yours and i can't wait for the next part, why dreading it at the same time as it'll be one step closer to the end and right now i'm in that wacky reading stage when you've read something so good you never want it to stop and your kinda addicted and each new part is like a blissful hit.... and now i sound like a crazy person- but alas it's true

as you might of guessed looking forward to the next chapter
all the best
~Rain