(Untitled)

Oct 19, 2009 16:23

TITLE : Working the Street~ Episode 3

AUTHOR : My dear Senpai in other fandom, and me for some revision.

GENRE: Shonen-Ai, AU.

PAIRING(S) : ChiiTaro (main), TakaChii (One-sided) and some random pairings.

RATING : R or above, I’m not sure.

WORDS COUNT : 3398.

WARNING : An extremely-foul-mouth Chii, mentions of abuse, massive sexual contents, some of adult ( Read more... )

morimoto ryutaro, my fanfiction, rated r, multi-chapter, takaki yuuya, chinen yuuri, fandom

Leave a comment

Comments 15

ai_star October 19 2009, 10:29:54 UTC
He walked out of the bathroom and found a pair of red and white striped socks and a folded gray brief lying on two cute furry slippers by the door

huwaaaaaaaaaa...cuteeeeeeee.....♥

Ryutaro chuckled upon hearing that. Chinen was a kind boy... he was trying to hide that fact, but it was too evident. As evident as his bratyness.

Chinen indeed is a kind guy....^___^.....eventhough his words kinda harsh..

"You are naked! And the lights are on! People can see you!" Ryutaro rattled waving his arms in despair.

"I'm positive I'm an even better view than fireworks..." Chinen shrugged. "...but people are sure looking at them."

huwaaa..free show yo....Lucky ryutaro..XDDDD

Doctors were going to check me, but my aunt had rights over me cuz I was a minor... well, still am... so she denied them the permission to check me and I was sent back homestupid doctor!!...Don't he knows that he has right to call police....damn stupid doctor ( ... )

Reply

momoiro71 October 20 2009, 07:29:15 UTC
Chii is a kind boy inside, it's obvious ne...
He just act tough, and don't let anyone see his true self beyond the thick barrier he'd built...
Anyone who make living in the streets must doing that right? If they want to survive....

Reply


hibinoasami October 19 2009, 12:32:13 UTC
GIMME THE HAMMIE BOY'S STIRY PUHWIIIEEEZZZ !!

and am kinda pitty Chii here.. i hope Ryu-tan could wkae him up XP

GANBATTE !!! *tackle u*

Reply

momoiro71 October 20 2009, 07:10:44 UTC
Yay...! A new reader of my fic...
Thank you for commenting ne,
as promised, i'll post an update today after i come back from college.
Let's be friend....
<333333333333

Reply


mitchy_fleur October 19 2009, 12:53:41 UTC
awwwww~~~~
ryutaro being innocent here >/////<
kawaii~~

"You are naked! And the lights are on! People can see you!" Ryutaro rattled waving his arms in despair.

"I'm positive I'm an even better view than fireworks..." Chinen shrugged. "...but people are sure looking at them."

I bet ryutaro enjoying him self :p

nice story!! ^^
thanks for writing!
i'm waiting ryuu story by the way ^^

Reply

momoiro71 October 20 2009, 07:16:43 UTC
Irasshai~ Irasshai~ new reader...
Thank you for commenting....
Off couse dear, Ryuu-chan is SOO innocent in this fic, oh, maybe the way too innocent???... XDD...
I'll post episode 4 right away...
Yay!!!!!!!!!
Let's be friend...

Reply


kyaaaaaaaaaa<3 kodochalover October 19 2009, 16:18:22 UTC
hehe Chii IS SO DAMN HOT!!!!!!!!!
I just love how mature he is here. kyaaa!!!!
*fan girl spazz* IM SO ADDICTED TO THIS FIC!!
LOL i swear when i saw your update i was like "OMG OMG OMG!!!" my classmates were looking at me funny xP

well on to my favorite sentences:
"Hey! Morons!" Chinen started screaming and swayed his hips towards the glass pane. "Look at me! I'm better than fireworks!"

OMG!! of course CHINEN!!! im positive that he is better than fireworks!! lol i would definitely look at him instead of the fireworks<3

"You want it, guys?! There is a price on it, and let me tell you it's not cheap! So you better enjoy the view now! I'm your fucking Santa gift!"

OMG!!! CHIII you are so expensive!
BUT I WOULD SO LOVE YOU IF YOU WERE MY CHRISTMAS PRESENT :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reply


kyaaaaaaa<3 continued kodochalover October 19 2009, 16:33:22 UTC
woahh sorry for the second comment, but my laptop's battery died T^T

"No... Don't hurry to thank anyone, Ryutaro. My cousin didn't rape me... my uncle did it instead."

OH MY! Poor chii T^T!!! IM SO SORRY! I just wanna kill his uncle and cousin so bad!!!!!!! they deserve to die!!!!
And i just realized that i love it when Chinen swears lol im so weird but i really do feel that the story is great with chinen's excessive swearing :]

well im off to La La land~ well more like classwork lol
since im at school right now so i have to get back to my work or else my teacher will be mad -_- hehe...

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! im so happy that you were able to update soon<3
and i really do hope that you can post Ryutaro's story soon^-^ ill be looking forward to it.
Gambatte!<3

Reply

Re: kyaaaaaaa<3 continued momoiro71 October 20 2009, 07:35:53 UTC
Whuaa... Long comment...
And I love long comment<3333... XDD..
CHII FOR YOUR CHRISTMAS PRESENT???
OH NO, I WON'T GIVE HIM TO YOU!!!! XDDD....
FYI,He'll spent his white christmas with me...
Lol....
yEAH, GANBARIMASU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up