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it's me , jasmine-shassie, i'm at work can't log in.. anonymous June 10 2009, 01:22:24 UTC
Gosh that was hot though, now i wish i was home so i could take a cold shower..!! ;) daym i hope that happens in Season 4.. even if it's subtly :P
my fav line was:
“Look Chief, Shawn here thought he had a psychic pulsation…err, throbbing-- err, vibration--in his pants-I mean, in this closet so we came--I mean went-- in here to check him out-- I mean, it.” and the rest.. "peni" too :P :P:P
you're an awesome Shawn writer and Shawn's hard. top job! :D
:)

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Re: it's me , jasmine-shassie, i'm at work can't log in.. momonoki June 10 2009, 08:07:29 UTC
Thanks so much!! I really appreciate the compliments. =D Yeah, I really liked the idea of Lassie being so flustered he couldn't get a sentence to not sound perverted, so I had to write it, LOL =D And it would be sweet if in Season 4 they did some kind of scenario like this, where they were stuck together in a room somewhere...maybe they wouldn't make out, but maybe it would at least be a little slashy--like you said, something subtle. XD Again, thanks for your comment, it means a lot!

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penguinfighter June 10 2009, 21:38:24 UTC
This story made me full of squee XD The thought of every other word Lassie spoke being a horrid little porn reference was awesome and Shawn being Shawn with the whole situation was spot-on.

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adafrog June 12 2009, 02:55:16 UTC
Cute, thanks.

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bellamai June 12 2009, 20:28:19 UTC
Adorable little awkward-teenager-esque Lassie is the greatest thing ever.

Seriously.

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eternal_dolor July 3 2009, 15:51:22 UTC
Fabulous story. I really enjoyed it

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