Hope & Pain (Chapter 6/?)

Apr 13, 2010 23:19


Title: Hope & Pain
Author: Me^.^
Pairing: Tegoshi/Masuda
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, romance
Summary: Tegoshi lived behind and armour, a smile that prevented him from getting enemies. But eventually, he would let someone inside, smiling genuinely at that special person.
Notes: English is my second language, mistakes will occur even though I try to not ( Read more... )

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momonyan April 14 2010, 06:47:00 UTC
That's because I'm always posting it so late XD

Thanks for reading ^.^<33333

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yumenokoe April 13 2010, 21:56:10 UTC
I'm glad there will be fluff next! this was all getting really depressing T_T
But you're right, ne, tegoshi needs to take his time before moving on ^^
can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

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momonyan April 14 2010, 06:48:21 UTC
I'm tired of all this angst...Tegomass needs some fluff!

Thanks for reading ^.^<33333

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erikaoi April 13 2010, 23:09:55 UTC
So sad.no wonder tego like that,his relative is horrible.but glad he have massu.will wait for the fluffy

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momonyan April 14 2010, 06:49:17 UTC
Once again Masuperman is there to defend him <3

Thanks for reading ^.^<3333

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meli_29 April 13 2010, 23:22:34 UTC
ow ;_;
this was so tender! Massu is really, really amazing here~
I'm sure he would make Tesshi so happy (: because he's sweet and strong and cares about Yuya~
but uh, poor baby ): even their relatives are cruel with Tesshi ;_;
such a horrible woman ¬¬! Tego's mother died~ and she's doing it harder! adadasdasd
Massu, hold Tego's hand firmly forever xD lol♥

ow, I loved this chapter so much :D
please, keep writing like this

*chus*

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momonyan April 14 2010, 06:50:40 UTC
Tego doesn't have it easy, that's for sure...But Massu will always defend him <3

Thanks for reading ^.^<3333

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smile_as_a_noun April 13 2010, 23:43:07 UTC
I don't usually comment on stories because I'm lazy XD
But I just wanted to say that you wrote this really well ^^

My dad passed away a year ago, and I pretty much felt exactly like you described Tesshi feeling (except sadly I had no Massu to comfort me XDD)...I don't really think its an easy thing to write about, but you did a wonderful job. I really like this story! <333

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momonyan April 14 2010, 06:54:02 UTC
;__________; That's so sad ;______; *hugs*

I'm so glad I managed to do it realistic and described his emotions well, because I would feel bad if I would have done a bad job with it...

Thank you so much for reading <3333

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