ATWT Fanfic: Of Guilt, Hate& Karma

Sep 23, 2010 09:05

 Title: Of Guilt, Hate& Karma
 Author: mon_alice
 Spoilers: none if you've seen the show till the end,
 Summary:  Post /around craptastic! Tuesday of Doom. Luke grapples with Reid's death.
 Pairings: Luke/Reid mentions, Katie/Chris mentions
 Form: One shot.
 Warnings: Mental angst of going to the dark side. Passante wanted him all grown up, right?
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jload September 23 2010, 12:34:57 UTC
Yeah, I'd say that Luke is at the same point all of us viewers are at, ha ha! Especially love your recap of why we now loathe Bob, Kim, Katie, etc.

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mon_alice September 23 2010, 12:38:27 UTC
Yaah well, I somehow felt he'd be at this point.
Or is it me? ;>

Anyhow thanks for reading& commenting :)

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alissablue September 23 2010, 13:32:29 UTC
I'm still bitter, so I kind of feel like Luke here, hating all those characters. So I loved it, this was wonderful =)!

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mon_alice September 23 2010, 13:40:16 UTC
Well apparently me too,and very much so.

Glad you like it:)))

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odisowner September 23 2010, 14:47:52 UTC
I loved this for the obvious reason of sharing your Chris hate. But I also appreciate your view of Luke and how this would affect him as a transplant recipient. Thanks for writing.

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mon_alice September 23 2010, 22:03:58 UTC
Glad you like it:)))

And the whole recipient/donor thing really bummed me out (well, what didn't?) on the show. They glazed over it like it was no problem. Ghh.

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sripley September 23 2010, 15:54:05 UTC
I LOVE this, because basically... Luke is thinking just like we are; he's blaming the same people for the same reasons, he's feeling guilty for it like many [though not all lol] of us do, and he knows that even if they all appear happy now, it won't last. These people are too messed up for it to last. Sadly, Luke and Reid were probably the only ones I could honest to god see making it because Reid is the only sane one in that town! Thank you, for showing us what we all understand and most of us believe Luke feels at least on some level, even if TPTB decided to make him understanding on the show. This was wonderful. <3

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mon_alice September 23 2010, 22:08:20 UTC
Ha ha.I think Luke is feeling more guilt than I the author am, but then again he is Luke Snyder, and since when can one REALLY control the characters? Author just gets an idea and the characters do stuff in the middle. Of their own volition. Unless it's on the soap when they're SLAVES...
So anyway, right...I'm so not bitter. :>

I agree with you on Luke& Reid being the only couple that could've made it in the long run. Maybe that's why was killed. He was too normal.

And thanks for feedback bb :)

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tuckatangent September 23 2010, 15:59:49 UTC
That was so nice to Luke's hatred for all the characters. I hate them all too.

This was very cathartic, because I never believed that Luke would just smile, and go on like nothing happened, like Reid wasn't stolen from by some horrible circumstances and some vultures. It makes perfect sense for him to get in touch with his rage.

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mon_alice September 23 2010, 22:10:18 UTC
I know. And how he went through the Supersonic Grieving Method so fast was just..ugh.

And Luke always feels so much. I refuse to believe he doesn't feel the abbove.:>

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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