Comments | monaboyd_month: second, half-baked offering

eff_reality in monaboyd_month

second, half-baked offering

Jul 30, 2012 19:42

Hello again! As I said this morning, a bad cold blindsided me toward the end of this fic, so it is only about half-finished, sadly. But here is the first part. Enjoy!

( Para que no te olvidara )

Comments 8

sandelwood July 31 2012, 00:41:14 UTC

I WOULD GET A MASSAGE FROM VIGGO'S HANDS ANY DAY OF THE WEEK. JUST SAYING.

Also I love this relaxed, happy, beachy Dom SO MUCH. I want to know his story, and I want him to take a little of Billy's stress away! And I don't think Billy's boring, boo, he's just trying to have a vacay without worky work on his mind. Not unlike you and yours at the time, really.

I love the world you've made here. I can smell the ocean and the horses, and feel the sun and the dirt. Can't wait for the rest!

eff_reality August 1 2012, 17:39:09 UTC

Aha, thanks, boo. I would like to think Viggo is great at a massage (among other things).

Thank you for your kind words re: the atmosphere. I'm glad it translates!

carribbe July 31 2012, 03:04:19 UTC

I wouldn't describe this as 'half baked'. I think it's well thought out, and I quite enjoyed it.

I, too, am eager to read the rest of it. :)

eff_reality August 1 2012, 17:39:31 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I hope to finish the second half very soon. :)

babydazzle August 7 2012, 20:14:44 UTC

eff_reality August 9 2012, 17:00:45 UTC

Thank you, darling! I hope to have the rest posted soon. And we all know what "soon" means for me... :D

msilverstar September 23 2012, 00:32:55 UTC

(I'm really sorry it took me so incredibly long to leave this comment. I hope late is better than never.)

I love the slow build-up here, the sense of a place I've never been, Billy's cynicism overlying his hopefulness, Dom the nature tour guide, and Viggo being practical (people so often write him as flakey). I hope there will be more!

(also, LJ has been screwing with my comments, if you get this seven times, I am REALLY SORRY.)

eff_reality September 23 2012, 16:06:39 UTC

Hello! Thank you so much. :D I love belated comments...

I rarely write Viggo, but I have very specific ideas about him, I do. And you're absolutely right; I don't see him as flaky at all. I've always seen him as extremely connected to everyone and everything, fiercely observant, and deliberate with everything he does. And very carefree as a result!