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Monaboyd - 2013

Jun 20, 2013 05:51

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Comments 13

rubyelf June 20 2013, 18:50:10 UTC

Always wondered, considering how close these two are, what she thinks about all of it... lovely story.

carribbe June 21 2013, 00:23:10 UTC

Me, too - I think it's intriguing. (And I wish I knew more about something that's absolutely none of my business.) :)

melaniesuzanne June 20 2013, 19:46:06 UTC

I was all sniffly and then hit the "d'aaawwww" part. Lovely. :)

carribbe June 21 2013, 00:24:32 UTC

Sniffly? And d'aaawww?

You're cute. Thank you.

carribbe June 23 2013, 15:17:12 UTC

I meant to ask - what for you was the "d'aaawwww" part?

melaniesuzanne June 24 2013, 14:17:17 UTC

The last three paragraphs starting with Dom telling Billy to be careful what he wishes for. That was so sweet.

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pippins_penny June 20 2013, 23:21:36 UTC

Sweet, thank you!

carribbe June 21 2013, 00:24:52 UTC

You're quite welcome.

foxrafer June 21 2013, 13:08:08 UTC

I really like the gentleness in this.

carribbe June 22 2013, 14:56:02 UTC

I'm speculating, of course, it would go that way - always the potential for lots of screaming and other conflict, etc., but I actually don't see either of them that way.

cordeilla33 June 24 2013, 13:08:47 UTC

I loved this fic! <3

I too would hope that it would turn out this way...cause Ali 'does know' and they both know it! LOL! I think deep down if Billy had to choose between Ali and Dom - he would choose Dom...he can play house with Ali...but he can't LIVE without Dom. <3

carribbe June 24 2013, 13:14:56 UTC

My thoughts as well - I don't think he could leave Dom behind. It would devastate both of them...

I am pleased you enjoyed it. :)