I call it "Room To Grow"... 'Cause I'm tired.

Feb 13, 2012 23:37

So, true to my word, drabble. Based on Kaidan and [Amanda] Shepard. I hope you like it, lilchickadee, but honestly, HONESTLY, I wrote it between work and bedtime, so I don't have the awareness right now to know if it turned out well or not, so feel free to tell me if you don't. I won't be offended. XD

... oh... and... HAPPY VALENTINES DAY, EVERYONE!!!


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lilchickadee February 14 2012, 05:11:05 UTC
OH MY GOSH. THANK YOU! ♥♥♥♥

This is simply amazing and wonderful and wholly unexpected and just perfect. I honestly couldn't stop grinning as I read it. I want to single out favorite bits, but I just can't because it's all so good.

I do love the different descriptions of her hair as it changes and how her hair alone changes the appearance of her face, but that Kaidan loves all of her faces regardless. I love the way that you express that he does get to see "all of her faces" and the way he sees her underneath all of it.

This is all just so wonderful and so so good.

Thank you. ♥

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mondaisenshi February 14 2012, 06:04:10 UTC
Awwwww, I'm glad I made it work~ It just.... Ugh, it bit my brain and wouldn't let go, earlier. I think... I got her... And them... Right... I think.

I probably cut out as much as I kept 'cause it took me too long to find my pacing...

UGH ANYWAY I'm gonna shut up and just take the compliment now. ♥ I really am glad you liked it.

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lilchickadee February 14 2012, 14:42:40 UTC
I think... I got her... And them... Right... I think.

You absolutely did. ♥ And I'm so very grateful that you did this for me. Truly. I've actually lost count of how many times I've reread it now, and I still love it just as much as I did on the first read.

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lilchickadee February 14 2012, 17:09:22 UTC
P.S. May I pimp this over on my LJ so that those who may not have us mutually friended can see it? Because it totally made me squee and I want to squee about it. But only if you're okay with it.

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