Fic: Don't Look Back

[mondeo]

Fandom: Without a Trace
Title: Don’t Look Back
Pairing: Danny/Martin
Rating: PG-13
Author's Notes: I don’t own Without a Trace, because if I did Elena wouldn’t have been allowed near the show. The lyrics don’t belong to me either, so please don’t sue. Originally written for dm-undercover.
Summary: Fic inspired by Tiffany’s Song Danny. Features both boy’s POV

Comments

[farad]

That's - wonderful. I admit that I had some serious concerns as you went along that they *wouldn't* end up where (we all know) they are supposed to! I love the way you characterize them - Martin planning what he's going to say then realizing that he can't have a plan for this, Danny feeling guilty and unable to talk to Martin through the fear. Wonderfully written. Thanks for writing -and for getting them to that kiss!!!!!

[mondeo]

Yeah, there was a point where I was beginning to worry they wouldn't get it together too! But I refused to let that happen, haha. I'm glad you liked it =)

[m_l_h]

This has left me with a lovely big smile. Fantastic!

[mondeo]

Thanks, glad you liked it!

[inkblot_fiend]

Oh, this is lovely! I love their confusion and renewed awkwardness, and then the bit at the end just made me go all "aaaawwwww" and smiley. :D - like that.

Since this is actually just about where I got up to on the TV, I'm accepting this as my own personal canon until 4 puts it back again, ok?

[mondeo]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending, I was a bit worried it was too corny, hehe.

Yeah, you should accept it as canon, because there's no Elena getting in the way *glares at Elena*