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[mondschein1]

Here's the thing. I was trying really hard to get the ds_flashfiction Inuit Story Challenge done, and it was really rough going because I hadn't written in so long. So of course I had to come up with this complex story structure -- and I never come up with needlessly complex story structures -- where I need to remember how to write not only Fraser and Ray, but

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[green_grrl]

That was the wildest Inuit story yet, and I can't believe it got passed all the way around the office! Fraser really is rubbing off on all of them. :D

Just then, Ray explodes out of the interrogation room, for all the world like an edgy, spiky-haired knight in shining armor.

Oh, yes!

[mondschein1]

Yes, well, as we all know, Fraser is a rock star. These things will happen. :-)

Thanks for reading!

[luzula]

Oh, this was fun! It's like some kind of misinterpretation comedy, and I liked having everyone at the station show up. Poor long-suffering Welsh.

[mondschein1]

Poor long-suffering Welsh, indeed. :-) He is totally my favorite. Glad you enjoyed it!

[zabira]

this is AWESOME. BOYS = ♥ ♥ ♥

i love your use of the ENTIRE bullpen, and their wacked-out theories about the inuit stories are HILARIOUS, but i think my favorite bit is actually this:

"I believe you," Fraser lies, bracing for the overwhelming urge to contradict himself and tell her the truth. The first ten seconds, he's found, are the hardest to bear.

OH. that is SO beautifully FRASER.

♥

[mondschein1]

Heee! Thanks so much!

I initially just said "Fraser lies", and then like some kind of sign, the episode of Mountie on the Bounty that I had put on to get my Fraser-muse to wake up said, "If you don't tell me where my partner is, I will kick you in the head." "Really?" "...well, no, not really." So, I figured, hey. :-)

[anonymous]

Awwww. That was so cute. I haven't read a DS story in ages, but this one had everything I like - lots of wacky Frannie, police hijinks, and a kissing Fraser and Ray. Awesome!

[mondschein1]

Aww, thanks for reading!

[primroseburrows]

I love this--it's like a Shakespearean set in dS!Chicago, with all its misunderstandings and (Inuit)story-within-a-story stuff. And Fraser and Ray and Frannie and everyone are delightfully themselves, and Welsh (also being very much Welsh) deserves an award for putting up with all of them. Yay!

[mondschein1]

*laughs out loud* Oh, Lord, Shakespeare in Chicago. I think the only time dS used Shakespeare was in Hawk and Handsaw, right?

OH MY GOD, WE SHOULD MAKE WELSH AN AWARD. ...what do you suppose he'd think was a fitting reward? It should come with, like, a lifetime supply of antacids or a promotion or something.

[primroseburrows]

Most likely to get a bleeding ulcer. (WHY DO I NOT HAVE A WELSH ICON?)

[mondschein1]

I DO NOT KNOW!! I should make one. *starts sifting through episodes for a good still of him*