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[mondschein1]

So, this is from my Writing Exercise Grab-Bag: "F/K, break it thoroughly, leave 'em apart for several years, put 'em back together.". That's pretty much it, only I didn't have the patience to leave them apart for several years, and also I saw an interesting pattern in canon, so I changed it to a couple months instead

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[j_s_cavalcante]

"Ray," he says, in that special, quiet way that always sends a shiver down Ray's spine. "Let me -- let me take you on an adventure. I'll show you the world, everything, every beautiful thing the Northwest Territories have to offer -- and we'll start over. From the beginning."

Okay, that there is THE MOST BEAUTIFUL request to go on the Quest that I have ever read. Beautiful story!!!! *big happy sighs*

[mondschein1]

Awww, thanks! ...and you know something, now that you mention it, for a couple of days it was a really hard thing to get there and not feel like I'd done it a million times before. Solution (as always): more story. :-D

[akamine_chan]

Sweet and lovely. Thank you for sharing.

[mondschein1]

Thank you so much!

[china_shop]

Oh awesome! Booooys -- being stupid and then getting it together, yay!

*twirls you*

[mondschein1]

*spiiins!* Thankee!

[ariastar]

Mm, this is lovely. The part where Fraser realizes that Ray's frightened not for any of the reasons he's given but because he cares too much is kind of perfect -- and makes me not want to shake Fraser for breaking it off, even, because in this particular case it actually is the responsible and caring thing to do. And of course I love Fraser realizing later that the responsible thing to do isn't necessarily the right one (because it's not as though Ray actually cares any less or does fewer stupid things just because they're not sleeping with each other), and I love that Ray's still a tangled mass of freaked-out insecurities. I'll also echo the above comment that this has the most beautiful request to go on the Quest I've ever read. Just, yay. <3

[mondschein1]

(because it's not as though Ray actually cares any less or does fewer stupid things just because they're not sleeping with each other)

Exactly! Stupid Fraser.

Thank you ever so much!

[spuffyduds]

Oh, this is just lovely and perfect.

[mondschein1]

Awww, thanks!