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[mondschein1]

So, I was originally writing this fic as my entry for Team Reality. But about a thousand words in I decided that it had officially crossed the line between Reality and Gratuitous Angst, so I abandoned it and started up a new story.

In any case, here is a fic. F/K, 2200 words, rated R for sexual activities. Warning: angst all over EVERYTHING.

Comments

[petronelle]

Oh, you have a real way with that heart-gouging. I kept wanting Ray to relent and yet feeling that it was thoroughly in-character for him not to do so.

[mondschein1]

Aw, thanks. *patches up heart with duct tape*

[julia_here]

Seriously: way too much reality here, for sure. Stupid amounts of reality.

Great story, though, just... got plenty of the itchier kinds of reality, I guess.

Julia, me, I'm all for surreality, areality, fantasy, science fiction, et'c and so on

[mondschein1]

Yeah, I've got to agree with you after struggling to churn out my ds_match fic. I like the genre, but currently I've OD'd on it. Next one's going to be filled to the brim with crack, I promise you.

[julia_here]

So glad you got what I meant, as I was afraid you'd not get what I meant; love the story, admire it greatly, but at the end of one of those days whan everything has to be done at once, I could use a little romantic, whimsical, or merely highly unlikely fantasy.

Julia, would go to bed, but that would mean making the bed first.

[brigantine]

Ow, ow, ow, ow... really well-written, and kind of tragically beautiful... ow, ow, ow...

[mondschein1]

Awww. *pets* Glad you liked it!

[love_jackianto]

Ow... Very well written and very sad. I can really see Ray reacting just like that.

[mondschein1]

Thanks! (And sorry for the ow!)

[noctuabunda]

Ouch. Stupid Ray. Stupid reality.
But very well written, and - sadly - very in character.

[mondschein1]

Stupid reality, indeed. :-/

Thanks!