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Sep 15, 2008 03:02

Dear God, why am I awake? Um. Well, actually I know why I'm awake. There's nothing like trying to write an essay in a foreign language to make you appreciate the relative simplicity of writing fanfic in your mothertongue. On the other hand, it's past three in the morning and I'm dead on my feet and still haven't got my RL work done, so. I take ( Read more... )

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akamine_chan September 15 2008, 13:00:04 UTC
Poor Fraser. Words fail him, sometimes.

I liked this, Fraser not being perfect and messing up and being unable to say what he feels. Nice.

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mondschein1 September 19 2008, 04:40:27 UTC
Aww, thanks. He's really surprisngly bad at communicating, sometimes, considering how he excels at everything else, and considering the size of his librarian-derived vocabulary.

Glad you enjoyed it!

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gloriana September 15 2008, 14:00:22 UTC
This is very sweet :) I love the way Ray just gabbles on, saying all the things that need to be said and making assumptions about the rest (the Chinese ordering thing was particularly in character). Very nice :)

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mondschein1 September 19 2008, 04:42:55 UTC
Ray is all about the clarity achieved through gabbling. It's his unique speciality, it is.

Thanks for reading!

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meresy September 15 2008, 15:20:56 UTC
♥!

♥ ♥ ♥

Oh, Fraser. He's really kind of a lost cause.

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mondschein1 September 19 2008, 04:43:38 UTC
SERIOUSLY. It's a good thing he's pretty, or -- well, actually, it's a good thing that Ray puts up with him. That's what I meant to say. :-P

Glad you liked it!

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love_jackianto September 15 2008, 15:49:45 UTC
Nice story. I really liked the dialogue. Great Ray voice.

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mondschein1 September 19 2008, 04:44:17 UTC
Thank you kindly!

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slidellra September 15 2008, 17:18:02 UTC
Lovely! I love him being "fantastically ill-prepared." ♥

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mondschein1 September 19 2008, 04:46:23 UTC
*tsks at him* Bad, bad mountie. Though I doubt his superiors will ever get word of it, so I suppose he's not in danger of having his lanyard severed again, right?

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