[drabble] 001

May 28, 2012 01:25

End of precipice
Kai/LuHan, pg-13, au!fantasy, romance, 500 words
Every time his heart skips a beat, worlds come apart.

Inspiration: We got a whole lot of money but we still pay rent 'cause you can't buy a house in heaven. (You & I, Lady Gaga)

You can wear my heart on your sleeve. )

pairing: kai/luhan, !fiction, fandom: exo, *drabble

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suntaem May 28 2012, 00:07:53 UTC
This is beyond perfect. I dont even know how to explain how i feel....Lukai is honestly my Exo OTP and when i saw this I freaked out a little and now after reading I'm in a daze.

My favorite part is the third part, it's so beautifully written...

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moneeque May 28 2012, 11:28:26 UTC
I'm so happy meeting other LuKai shippers, we're running on empty with all the HunHan going around >.<. LuKai is also my OTP along with BaekYeol but not as special for me (though I'd lie if I'd say I don't love them with the power of million suns, it's just that I adore LuKai so much more).

Thank you so, so much for reading, I truly appreciate your words ;__;♥ I am not worthy /sobs

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mayumi_san May 28 2012, 00:38:08 UTC
Can I marry this fic please.

Omg so beautifully and so poetic and so flowy I can't even

More please?

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moneeque May 28 2012, 11:31:49 UTC
UGH. YES. I NOW PRONOUNCE YOU WOMAN AND ERM FANFIC. YOU MAY KISS AND HAVE BABIES ♥

Thank you so much for reading and writing such a lovely comment ;A; /ugly sobbing

If life doesn't get in the way, hell yes, there are going to be more :Dv

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burntsienna18 May 28 2012, 01:14:42 UTC
wow... i'm really impressed. this fic was so beautiful! it was well-written and it was like every word fit the next, like a long puzzle *___*
i loved all of it!
i mem-ed this ^^
thanks for sharing this amazing fic!

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moneeque May 28 2012, 11:34:58 UTC
ASDFGHJKL THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUU T~T/♥

I'm glad it turned out to be readable in the end and that you liked it ;__;

Thank you so much once again!

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suntaem June 1 2012, 16:06:23 UTC
Exactly how I feel with Baekyeol as well!! And yeah LuKai shippers are pretty rare :T
I remember watching the Time Control teaser and it was love at first sight to be honest...

And no, thank YOU for writing this. It's definitely one of my faves <3

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glowingcloud June 8 2012, 21:20:47 UTC
I was beyond shock when I read this drabble because that's exactly how I had imagined them after watching the MAMA MV, especially the first part with Luhan waiting in his prison and knowing and the last part when they are left alone , Jongin in Luhan's arm.
I have also had an idea with a game they were playing (though it was against the other exo pairs and they were the last one to stay) and many dimensions... I have never read a story as close of my musings as this one, that's really creepy (because it gave me the impression that you have read my mind, and in the same time it's different but so, so close), however you write so well and you gave the couple that sensuality that made them become my OTP after watching the MV (the look Kai gave to Luhan was so awfgsedenjfbfrjbf).

This will stay as one of my favourite lukai fiction for a long, long time. Thank you so much for writing this.

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