traffic

[monggi]

-traffic
-angst
-news
-koyama/shige, ryo/shige
-there is a smile faltering under the rays of bright red mingled with yellow blinking lights. a glint of regret flicks in your eyes.

:this fic/drabble was inspired by the amazing

Comments

[catskilt]

This is awesome.... ♥♥♥

It really makes my heart ache. The thought of Koyama knowing about Shige and Ryo but keeping silent about it is heartbreaking! I love how you incorporated the yellow light and traffic lights in it. It matched the first part of the chapter perfectly.

I'm so happy that I wrote that chapter because it inspired a beautiful drabble like this. Thank you so much for writing it! I'll link this to the index ♥

Just a request though. Could you mention me as misticloud instead of tabai, because tabai is just mine and Rissa's fic journal =x

[monggi]

you liked it?! you did! OMG! wow! wow! i'm speechless?!

you're like wow! you left a comment! i'm honored(?) :) thanks

it really is heartbreaking. the people i've met,who had experienced being cheated but not to that extent, told me that they feel that something changed, so i guess when i read your fic, it immediately made me thought about koyama knowing the truth

you should write more fics, i know people are inspired by them

(blabbering much? sorry?)

oh, is that so? i'm gonna edit it now :)

thanks for reading ♥ and can i friend you? please?

[catskilt]

I liked it! <3

LOL am I not writing enough fics already?! I feel like I'm spamming with the amount of updates, haha.

Sure, let's be friends :)

[salwaphoenix]

beautifully written ^^

i like the idea of how koyama knew about nishikato and still thinks in the end, shige is his cuz he's still the last person who gets shige..

"His lips crush on me hungrily, palms brushing my heated skin. He looks me in the eye, a message clear in pupils glassy and light.

I’m yours tonight."

yay!

[monggi]

everyone seems to like that line... i love that line too. i started with that line hahaha...

thanks, really!
yah, it's kind of heartbreaking for koyama to think that way. it's like how a wife thinks when he's husband is cheating wtih another woman ne?

thanks again : )

[polyurethane]

I really liked the flow of this.

And the imagery was really nice too.

My heart breaks for Koyama. ;___;

[monggi]

my heart breaks for him too...
thanks for reading
we could just hope misticloud makes it better for him ne

[polyurethane]

We'll have to see where Misti goes with it.

I can only hope Koyama find someone of his own if he doesn't get Shige.

[monggi]

i hope so too... i feel so sad for koyama...

[omichan92]

YAY you posted a new fic! (: i love your writing style, be it tomapi or any other pairings, and you just hit right on on a pairing that i dont mind either xD bonus points for making it a love triangle between koyashigeryo <3 i love reading koyashige fics that have a shigeryo at one side so i can cry and blubber like a baby about poor keichan xD

i love your fic, keichan made me cry

I’m yours tonight.

this line just killed me <3

[monggi]

hi! i know i should be writing my tomapi hahaha... it's still rolling :)
koyashigeryo luv triangle is tear-jerking neh?
i hope your eyes don't get puffy and all red, that'd be such a shame
kei-chan made me cry too!
and yes, it killed me too

thanks for reading! ♥

[stigma2008]

i love how you write.. this sooo good...

[monggi]

thank you thank you
i'm glad you liked it