One Little Touch (Drabble)

[mongo_o_o]

Title: One Little Touch
Author: me (mongo_o_o)
Pairing: Sho/Nino
Rating: PG
Genre: kind of angsty?
Disclaimer: I don't own them (unfortunately)

A/N: Ok, so this is the first thing I have ever written (except for school essays) and I'm not really confident in it. A friend told me it was good and  I should post it, so here it is~ And I apologize for

Comments

[swankingdecency]

=( aw, that's sad.

this was really good for your first piece of writing outside of essays. good job! =)

[mongo_o_o]

thank you for your nice comment! makes me happy :)

[yamino_mitsukai]

The "I can't" broke my heart. That's so sad. Ahhhhhh I love Sakumiya but this made me want to smack Sho, really really hard.

However I liked it and I kind if would like to know what happens *coughhappyendingcough* but I get the 'drabble' notion and will settle for this. It was nice and a good read so congrats on your first fanfic. Tell your friend she knows her writing and thanks for encouraging you to post it.

Hope to read more (sakumiya *crosses fingers*) from you soon. =)

[mongo_o_o]

yeah, I know, stupid Sho lol
haha, sorry, but this story just doesn't have a happy end..
thank you for your really nice comment ^__^

[spn91]

I love it! The mood in this little drabble is amazing. To be honest. I looove that kind of one-shots. I can't really explain that... hm. Ok. 1. I like your summary. I read it, and already knew it will be good xD. And two, I think this "I can't" did it. It's hard to explain (like i said earlier)It's just... one thing, one word. And it makes you sad, happy or whatever. It's like with this "one little touch".
I like it. Really.One touch... ah, now I am happy xD. Even it this is sad (but I'm doing sad staff myself xP

Waiting for more. And i hope it will be also Sakumiya xD
I'm sorry. It was kinda selfish.

Have a nice day xD

[mongo_o_o]

thank you for your great comment!!! I'm glad that you like the mood, cause i didnt think my writing even could transfer a mood lol
have a nice day aswell :D

[bitsy_chan]

HUHUHUHU

[mongo_o_o]

oh, don't be sad :( thank you for your comment!!

[boblemon]

It was good. :) You should be more confident. I really liked the artistic quality, adding the italized lines between the really simple story. Longer would be better, though~ It gives me more to read. ^.^

[mongo_o_o]

thank you! :) i thought i should start with something short, maybe i will write something longer next time~