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Four Stages (KaiHun)

Jun 06, 2012 00:13

Title: Four Stages
Pairing: KaiHun, HunHan
Author: monick87
Length: Oneshot
Genre: Angst
Warnings: Smut and the fact that this is unbeta'd
Rate: NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't own anything but the plot.
Summary: Kai compares Sehun to things...

( 4 Stages here~ )

sehun, rated: nc-17, kai, pairing: hunhan, length: oneshot, media: fanfic, pairing: kaihun, exo

Comments 12

trish3815 June 6 2012, 06:21:12 UTC

Jongin loves Sehun... everything that he is going through is because he cannot get over his feelings.... but Sehun is the one that should feel worse because he is the one cheating on Luhan... if he really loved Luhan he wouldn't have done anything with Jongin.. I have never thought of Hope as a horrible thing but when you look at it it kind of is because it dangles you there into thinking it will get better but does it ever.... loved it... thanks for sharing..

monick87 June 7 2012, 16:27:13 UTC

You're very welcome! :) Well, I've always thought that hope is one of the worst feelings along with confusion...but I'm weird, lol. And yes, Sehun needs to clear his own feelings and stop being an asshole to Luhan AND Jongin...I have strong feelings about cheating, but I see both wrong: Sehun and Jongin, even though Jongin can't help himself.

aeries_amethyst June 6 2012, 08:07:37 UTC

*sniffles*

This was so beautiful :3 Like a good mix of angst and fluff and steamy scenes if you know what I mean *wink wink

I love the dynamic between Sehun and Jongin. It's like the love he feels for Sehun evolves over time and stages. Sure, there are always obstacles in the way cough Lu Han cough but he can't help himself anyways :P

I enjoyed this bb!!! Thank you for writing!!! *hugs*

monick87 June 7 2012, 16:27:58 UTC

You're welcome and thank you for being such a sweetie~ :D

stupidrhapsody June 6 2012, 08:36:27 UTC

he can help but wonder if this is how Sehun looks like when Luhan is the one inside him.
good enough for my not!hunhan shipper soul. yep. lu han tops.

Luhan is a wonderful person, a great friend and very handsome. He is the closest thing to perfection and he knows he doesn’t deserve what he and Sehun are doing to him, but he really can’t help it. Jongin prefers to have Sehun this way than not having him at all, even if he feels guilty, ashamed and hurt afterwards.

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monick87 June 7 2012, 16:29:50 UTC

:) THANK FOR REVIEWING! Snickers for you, not love. I've learned.

beatinlove June 6 2012, 15:51:18 UTC

i loved this so much ♥

monick87 June 7 2012, 16:30:06 UTC

Thanks! :D

lichter16 June 6 2012, 18:17:58 UTC

This is amazing. Thank you.

monick87 June 7 2012, 16:30:32 UTC

Glad you liked it~ :)