Fic - Executive Committee - Breaking Reasons

[monkeybarrel]

It's been a long time!

I'm totally out of practice. Oh well. It's hot outside.

Technically, this was for the March challenge at Temps Mort for "teasing", but I went over by a couple hours. ^^ Oh well x 2.

Comments

[yhibiki]

Oooh, I'm so happy to see something by you again. :) I've missed your writing!

And I always wondered why nobody tries to hit on Tokitoh -- until I remember that Kubota is extremely scary when he wants to be.

♥ I enjoyed this very much~

[monkeybarrel]

I've missed writing too. :)

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked it. :D

[flat_foot]

You make me miss the days you used to write EC/WA so frequently :p I really liked the interaction between Tachibana & Tokitoh. Evil semes are always fun >D

[monkeybarrel]

The ones capable of evil are often the most interesting. :D Thanks for your comment! I'm glad you liked it.

[flemmings]

(I read everyone talking about how lj eats posts and never think it applies to comments. Back to ctrl-c'ing everything again)

Lovely to have you back with such a lovely fic.

Paint. More paint. Even more paint

made me laugh. All storage rooms are the same storage room.

"Dirty pool, Kubota-kun."

Such an ear you have, she sighs enviously, for how things the characters never say in Japanese would sound if they were said in English. Writing EC characters is like making bricks without straw- takes a very deft hand to keep them together in the first place.

And this:
The hallway’s silence answered him first, followed up by a slow clapping sound

made me stop and roust out my copies to check if that really happened in canon, as I could see it doing, or if it just should have. Reading my copy gave me the sudden insight that Matsumoto is an early template of Goujun. Very satisfying, like placing that 'where have I seen this face before?' thing.

And then look, Matsumoto shows up at the end and look, he's unlock-- oh no you didn't. Oh yes

[monkeybarrel]

Thanks, J, for your comment. :D Made my day. Yeah, it's been awhile. (Can you tell I'm stressed??????) ^_- I didn't think about the Matsumoto/Goujun connection until you pointed it out. Hmmmm....

[hitode]

Eeee! So awesome. ♥ I love Tachibana. Especially when he's being evil.

And it's really cool to see something from you again.

[monkeybarrel]

Thanks for commenting! I really appreciate it. :D It's been so long. I'm glad it's something that people still enjoy.

[i_am_zan]

As with everone..I have missed your writing. Lovely, lovely....everything caught so well.

[monkeybarrel]

Wow, thanks. :D I'm so glad you liked it!