Comments | monkeygofishy: Beautiful Target

monkeygofishy

Beautiful Target

Mar 15, 2012 00:10

Beautiful Target | HaeHyuk, SJ | Fluff | G |

Oh my beautiful target, you zoom zoom my heart like a rocket...~~

( Donghae, stated his love, his undying love for a certain Lee Hyukjae, 18, same age as him and still, no sign; no clues that Hyukjae feels the same thing towards him aside from irritation and annoyance which was likely visible everytime he, well uh, disturb him. )

rating: g, fic: beautiful target, pairing: haehyuk, genre: fluff

Comments 11

dilaland March 14 2012, 16:32:04 UTC

I didn't know saranghae has a different meaning,
btw, nice fic! thumbs up :P

shin_ah_mi March 14 2012, 18:08:27 UTC

so so sweet!!!
that evil!magnae and his stupid bets!!!!aish !!!
but happy ending is happy!!!
thx for sharing

yuue04 March 14 2012, 20:08:29 UTC

*BASK KYU'S HEAD* ALL OF THIS HAPPENED BECAUSE OF YOU
IF IT WASN'T BECAUSE OF YOU THEY COULD HAVE A CHILD BY NOW *OKAY THAT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE*
BUT 3 YEARS??? 3 YEARS???LEE DONGHAE IS REALLY THE BEST!!!KYAAAAAAAAAAA!!!AND I CAN'T BELIEVE HYUK COULD RESIST HAE THAT LONG!!!
AWWWWWWWW THE ENDING IS JUST SO SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!
THANKS FOR SHARING!!!!

misakiryuu March 14 2012, 22:17:31 UTC

OMG HYUKKIE'S CONFESSION IS SOOO CUTEEEE!~~
And aww, Donghae had been confessing his feelings for three years :')

suju_wonderbang March 14 2012, 22:36:49 UTC

Awww so sweet...;w;
Hae pursued him for 3 years? omg
Gahah but this is your fault, Kyu. -__-;;
Don't push Hyukkie like that...XD
But yaay they got together in the end, kukuku!
Thanks for sharing. :)
P.S. My Korean is definitely not the best, but I think sa would be used for live? oAo Ahaha but it worked for your fic, of course. ^_^