part of the poem

May 08, 2006 16:21


on graduation day
i will probably cry
but it seems now that
it's too late for dreams
i need to give up and go home
becasue graduation day,
is just about here:
the day i lose you
for good
take the burden of the world
off of my shoulders
because i'm about to
fall in front of you
for the very last time
i don't want to say goodbye
but i don't have a ( Read more... )

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chret May 19 2006, 23:55:33 UTC
i thought poems had to rym and did u come up wit dat ur self? cause its fucking amazing

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monkeyninja3 May 23 2006, 22:16:41 UTC
sorry i just saw this comment.

yes i wrote it myself, and no they do not all have to rhyme.

thank you-i'm glad you like it. In the next comment, i'll try to copy the whole thing so you can read it.

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monkeyninja3 May 23 2006, 22:18:29 UTC
it's kinda long...but here's the whole thing ( ... )

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bearspirit June 9 2006, 02:44:30 UTC
:poke:
thats really good

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photograph_nov June 1 2006, 23:15:31 UTC
hello hello

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