Such a nice build up. It seems Alfred really WAS taking a page from Francis' book. The outfit at the end. Oh dear god. XD
Favorite line: “Is this incredibly salacious and improper act of debauchery ever going to happen again?”
It's just so very British. Nice going. It was a cute little fic with a nice character build up and explanation of the situation beforehand, before getting into any of the X-rated stuff. Which was extra cute, let me just say. ;)
What a surprise to see you writing again xD Took me a while to calm my mind down before I can write a comment.
Utterly hot, this thing, yes * q * Quality porn is always good ^ q ^
When Alfred said the coffee tasted like victory, I kind of hoping that Arthur would think he got toyed by Alfred, that Alfred used dirty move to get a coffee machine. Because insecure Arthur is delicious, but I'm glad it turn out this way * q * /still drooling
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed Arthur. :D I never really stopped writing, per say. I just haven't been confident in any of the stuff I've written lately, so I haven't posted in a while. Hopefully I'll get back into the swing of things. :3
And the oral sex with coffee bit was incredibly fun to write. I tried to make it as awkwardly sexual as I could. OTL <3
But be confident! > 3 < I've been dying to read your AUs, especially The Hunt ; 3 ; Unless you're not going to pick them up again then I won't say anything.
First you write that AMAZING fanfiction about porn writer!Arthur (I don't remember the title, but I have it in my favourites) and now this. This fanfiction is awesome, from the title to the plot, the horny boss and Alfred so Alfred about it. The scene when Arthur gets to learn how to savour coffee... pure genious! I loved it!
This review was written for Recensioni di Primavera @ maridichallenge.
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Favorite line: “Is this incredibly salacious and improper act of debauchery ever going to happen again?”
It's just so very British. Nice going. It was a cute little fic with a nice character build up and explanation of the situation beforehand, before getting into any of the X-rated stuff. Which was extra cute, let me just say. ;)
Awesome job.
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Utterly hot, this thing, yes * q * Quality porn is always good ^ q ^
When Alfred said the coffee tasted like victory, I kind of hoping that Arthur would think he got toyed by Alfred, that Alfred used dirty move to get a coffee machine. Because insecure Arthur is delicious, but I'm glad it turn out this way * q * /still drooling
Are you going to pick up writing again? :O
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And the oral sex with coffee bit was incredibly fun to write. I tried to make it as awkwardly sexual as I could. OTL <3
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I hope we will see more from you though ; 3 ; /
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Arthur you're such an awkward perv =u= and have a creative mouth.
Every English boss needs a charming American PA or what? XD
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you are hilarious.
I so enjoyed this on the KM--so glad you de-anoned :DDDD so much fun!
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This fanfiction is awesome, from the title to the plot, the horny boss and Alfred so Alfred about it. The scene when Arthur gets to learn how to savour coffee... pure genious! I loved it!
This review was written for Recensioni di Primavera @ maridichallenge.
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