[ohgojima] au drabble

[thixophobia]

My Japanese history class is the most boring thing ever, and the only way I can stay awake and take decent notes is if I’m doing something else at the same time. Because if I’m not I’m too drowsy to pay attention lol. So I wrote most of this while I was going back and forth between notes in class. Inspired by boycottbananas, while we were talking about wanting

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[boycottbananas]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. ♥♥♥

[boycottbananas]

Okay. Um. you should have got better security. should be should have gotten?

And dead bodies with police searched the could be dead bodies while the police searched the area or dead bodies with the police searching the area? :D?

But that's all I could really notice, other than the last line, which kdjhkfd so she actually wants him to reveal their secret so she'd get caught? ._.

BUT KLJFHKJDH THIS IS WAY BETTER THAN WHAT I HAD IN MIND AND actually a lot more heartbreaking ♥♥♥

“I could kill you,” he said quietly (even though he knew he wouldn’t), “I should kill you.”

and

But a normal teenage boyfriend didn’t hold a gun to his girlfriend’s throat

make my heart all fluttery. I think it shows just how bittersweet and tragic their pseudo-relationship is. ♥

fkjhgkdf :'D ILY. ♥♥♥

[thixophobia]

Lol my fail. I'll fix these~

AAAAH no that's suppose to be keep XD;; Because originally it was 'not to give away' but I was going to change it to keep but apparently I did not do that. FAIL D:

I'M SURE WHATEVER YOU HAD IN MIND IS AWESOMELY FANTASTIC AND YOU SHOULD WRITE IT ANYWAY :D?

It's like Romeo and Juliet but not D: Oh these two ♥

aklsdjhashfdasf ILY2 &hearts ♥

[boycottbananas]

:'D But they could've been right! Idk, I'm not good with grammar. XD;;

:DEAD: Ohhhhh, okay! Because it could have made for an epic and probably angsty >> sequel. BUT THIS COULD COME WITH AN AMAZING SEQUEL coughcough TOO~! :'D ♥ You do not fail. :( It would have been amazing either way. X3

I'LL TRY MY HARDEST, DEFINITELY, BUT YOURS WILL STILL BE A MILLION TIMES BETTER THAN MINE. ♥

Star Cross'd Lovers indeed, only bloodier~ :'D I kinda really love it. There's probably more of an adrenaline rush between their relationship than Romeo and Juliet's, anyway~ XP

kjfdhvkjdhfkdjg ILY MORE~ ♥♥♥

[citatsce]

I didn't notice any mistakes, mainly because I was flailing on how awesome this idea is. *o*

Suzuka is badass. Yuuto is Yuuto (♥).

I think I'm liking OhgoJima a little more, just because of your fics. XD;

[thixophobia]

There were some XD;; But hopefully I fixed them all. I claim no responsibility for the idea xD

Yes, yes she is. And Yuuto is always perfect pft ♥

Aw XD;; They're a cute little pairing ♥

[atenishinai]

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Okay so I have a weak spot for assassins and ahahahahaha I TOTALLY SEE THE DNANGEL IN THIS AND AKSLDJFASJFSLDKFJSDF SDFSDF

....Best drama ever. If it were, to you know, exist.

[thixophobia]

GOOD I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE. I remember once saying that if they ever did a live action Yuto would make a good Daisuke and Yamada Satoshi... idek /random

IT WOULD BE. Too bad I don't control what dramas are made :(

[xoxzyn]

THE WORLD NEEDS MORE OHGOJIMA. THE WORLD NEEDS YOU!

[thixophobia]

WELL... GOOD THING I DON'T PLAN ON LEAVING IT SOON?

[usagi_goes_pyon]

That was cute~ <3

[thixophobia]

:] Thanks for reading~ ♥

[usagi_goes_pyon]

Your welcome~
Continue writing~
^o^