This is great! You convey your ideas so clearly and honestly. I especially love the theme of asserting your worth by dominating lesser things (breaking things!... I adore destruction) The only critique I have is the very last sentence in the final paragraph. It's a little confusing starting with "what you do best". At first I thought it meant that "what you do best" could not be called a sport, an intelligence, or an art. A little change would fix it. Still, I really like the ending. It pulls everything together nicely, and its spaced away from the main body as if it was written in a slightly calmer time. Very cool.
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The only critique I have is the very last sentence in the final paragraph. It's a little confusing starting with "what you do best". At first I thought it meant that "what you do best" could not be called a sport, an intelligence, or an art. A little change would fix it.
Still, I really like the ending. It pulls everything together nicely, and its spaced away from the main body as if it was written in a slightly calmer time. Very cool.
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