Comments | monotrouble: It Snowed This Morning

monotrouble

It Snowed This Morning

Jan 10, 2007 23:12

One Piece is the property of Odachi/Shonen Jump. Yeah.

( Even when it's questionable if I have the testicular fortitude to post in coms, I better at least have fucking written. 238 words, Smoker centric, for the topic elements, nothing terribly sexy, vulgar, or violent. )

fic, one piece

Comments 9

yuki_kokoro January 11 2007, 05:09:35 UTC

*cuddles the last two paragraphs*

Even if you aren't terribly fond of this, I love the idea and think you did fine with it. ACE AND SNOW AND SMOKER. And... Aokiji is just such an interesting character.

I'm also fond of the odd detail of Ace being an early riser. Something about Smoker grumbling in bed while Ace is getting up. ^^

monotrouble January 11 2007, 05:32:36 UTC

Don't ever change that PPaulie icon, it does my heart a world of good.

As do you. <3

monotrouble January 11 2007, 05:32:56 UTC

NICE TYPING STUTTER THERE

Sorry 'bout that.

devlinnreiko January 11 2007, 06:10:57 UTC

That was my reaction to finding snow 'finally' on the ground this morning!!

I SO LOVED IT. Grumbling, sleepy Smoker...hehe...all Ace needs to do now is make snowman...

Awesome job. I like the contradictions between facts and characters.

monotrouble January 12 2007, 01:46:27 UTC

I had been struggling with the idea all week, and then I saw the first snowfall of the season out my window and it more-or-less all came together.

And thank you so so much!

fieryredqueen January 11 2007, 06:52:11 UTC

very cool. bittersweet. aokiji needs to be slashed more often, definitely. :D

monotrouble January 12 2007, 01:46:52 UTC

Thanks!

And yes. YES HE DOES. ^^

maldoror_gw January 11 2007, 13:33:32 UTC

Ooh, lovely idea, contrasting Ace and Aokiji, with diametrically opposed powers, ideologies, loyalties...and poor Smoker caught in the middle.

monotrouble January 12 2007, 01:47:47 UTC

^___^ Thank you. ♥♥♥