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Brief Lives (19/?)

Sep 19, 2011 22:58

Title: Brief Lives (19/?)
Author: monstrousreg
Word count: 3858
Warnings: none for this chapter.
Pairing: Erik/Charles.
Summary: Erik thinks he's going to seduce, interrogate and murder some nondescript CIA intelligence agent, and winds up biting more than he can chew. Charles is not keen on being murdered, he doesn't favor interrogations, and he's ( Read more... )

fraser is fraser what can i say, fic, x-men:1st class, au, plot bunnies from hell and similar rando, erik/charles

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avictoriangirl September 20 2011, 23:48:08 UTC

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what the problem with Charles' powers are and how he gets them back.

livewareissue September 23 2011, 04:33:24 UTC

This is amazing!

I love your characterisations of all the characters, particularly how the changes you've made in Charles' background have developed in the narrative.

Looking forward to the rest of the story!

vous_et_moi September 23 2011, 20:42:43 UTC

Fraser... is so... awesome. He's my favourite character. He's too cool.

Poor angry little Erik. Oh dear, boys, everything's looking quite messy for them right now, hey? I kinda want to send them a muffin basket with 'Everything's gonna be alright" written on the card.

Can't wait for the next chapterrrr I'm getting sad it's going to end soon though ;____;

tea_and_trifles September 24 2011, 00:57:58 UTC

I really enjoyed seeing Erik through Michael's eyes -- and finding out that Michael can think he's an asshat but still admire his courage and want to look after his wounded body and soul. Once again, great OC ( ... )

jen_chan13 September 26 2011, 03:33:14 UTC

AWESOME!!!!!!!!

sorry i have been so awol, new job is very demanding, and i need to be asleep in, like, four minutes to get up tomorrow, but YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! i have so much flail-y joy for fraser, and the kids in the past few chapters have been SUPER CUTE and awesome. erik's pov has been brilliant - and FRANCIS, omg that was genius!! i loved bamf!erik and bamf!charles taking on shaw - the counting you wove into those chapters was downright CREEPY. and after, i loved charles' hesitancy, his simple joy in touching others, the way he seeks comfort in touching erik - it's so beautifully fragile and child-like, when you've painted this picture of a strong, cold survivor throughout the rest of the fic.

god i need to stop rambling on, it's soooo past my bed-time.

LOVE.