Brief Lives (24/25)

Oct 15, 2011 15:17

Title: Brief Lives (24/25)
Author: monstrousreg
Word count:  3506
Warnings:  NC-17, I suppose.
Pairing: Erik/Charles.
Summary: Erik thinks he's going to seduce, interrogate and murder some nondescript CIA intelligence agent, and winds up biting more than  he can chew. Charles is not keen on being murdered, he doesn't favor interrogations, and he's ( Read more... )

oh look no blood, erik lehnsherr has feelings, ororo is awesome, fraser is fraser what can i say, fic, x-men:1st class, au, erik/charles

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sunday_luncheon October 16 2011, 06:24:18 UTC
All quiet in the western front, Erik sends back, frames it with warmth and peaceful and wraps snugly it in come join us.

The way you write about their telepathy is nothing short of beautifully poetic and I love reading it. Also love Erik and the silver horse, again SO beautiful. I've never read anything like it.

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singingduck2 October 16 2011, 08:44:54 UTC
Very sweet and peaceful chapter! I swear, the calm radiated from your writing.

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telperion_15 October 16 2011, 14:48:26 UTC
Don't apologise for you indulgence, because it's lovely!

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tea_and_trifles October 18 2011, 14:31:55 UTC
I enjoyed the gentle peace of this chapter. It is another kind of revenge on Shaw, I think, that Charles can put Shaw's sexual abuse behind him somewhat, and the comfort and peace in Charles and Erik's relationship is a warm relief after everything!

I like that you have left tatters of angst around the edges, though, like Charles' power still weighing heavily on him. But Erik's horse was so sweet. He seems to have a fondness for making Charles horses in your stories ;-)

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mander3_swish October 29 2011, 17:04:40 UTC
what an adorable chapter!
that little horse sounds so neat!

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