"Survival"

[montana_rosalie]

There is not a part of her that doesn't hurt. The pain is dull, always there and too constant to surprise her with its intensity.

When she woke up after the first day, she was certain that she was dying. Her head hurt so much and she could hear blood rushing in her ears, and when she tried to stand, she couldn't.

She thought she was dying, but

Comments

[montana_rosalie]

I am so glad you liked it. i was afraid it would drown among so many Aliyah fics. :D

[montana_rosalie]

Thank you so much. :D

[vamp926]

This was amazing. Really, you're a genius. Next session, you should come write for ncis_lfws. Even if it is Tony/Ziva you do, you write so beautifully, I think people could look beyond that.

Really beautiful. My favorite part; She's safe inside her head where a single word repeats itself over and over again, and it's comforting, it's soothing, it's an escape.

That word is a name. It's a prayer, it's hope, it's life after death.

It's so simple.

Tony.

[montana_rosalie]

I will totally consider it. I had no idea a community like that exists.

I'm glad you like, it's my favorite part too. :D

[montana_rosalie]

"Also a very interesting take on post-Aliyah that I haven't seen before." - This means the world to me. Thanks! :D

[sara_f_black]

So beautiful fic!!!!!!!! It's heartbroken but at the same time is so wonderful how she thinks in him!!!

Thanks for writting so good tiva!!! The world is a little better with more tiva XDDD

[montana_rosalie]

Thank you for reviewing. It means a lot. :)

[sara_f_black]

Did I mention I love your header??? Logan&Max are such an OTP!!!!!

You welcome!! There is so much TivaHate out there, that it's delightful to find so good tiva writting.

Keep writting about them, please!!!

[montana_rosalie]

OMG, thanks. M/L are totally my OTP & and Art Attack is my favorite episode ever! :D

I'm gonna keep writing Tiva, don't worry. :D

[krisrussel]

Waw... simply waw...
I was so terrified they both would die, but then cue or Probie and Gibbs :^)
Thank you so much for the happy ending and the amazing in character story.

[montana_rosalie]

Thank you for such a nice review. :D For a moment, I thought they were gonna die too, but then McGee came and I was relieved. :)