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montellico

simplify

Jul 12, 2013 21:37

title: simplify
pairing(s): ontae
rating: g
wordcount: ~1090
summary: "Hyung, if you had to describe me in one word, what would it be?"
a/n: I must have written this during wss promotions.. i dunno what i wanted from this (drabble?) man I DUNNO

( dude, all i said was what's up, i didn't ask for your life story )

ontae, shinee

Comments 19

gin_kairis July 15 2013, 06:31:52 UTC

Cute and funny! Well done ^^

montellico July 15 2013, 14:08:02 UTC

thank you!!! :)

oconje July 18 2013, 05:12:09 UTC

I usually like broOntae but this was super sweet and the end made me go "awww".

montellico July 18 2013, 05:36:07 UTC

oh yeah it's not everyone's cup of tea..ontae used to bug me because it felt like incest...i'm over it though haha
anyways thanks for reading & commenting!!! :)

dradou22 July 22 2013, 17:09:11 UTC

This is so ontae-ish I love it

montellico July 23 2013, 01:40:16 UTC

l o l
thanks!!! :)

k_a_r_l_a October 9 2013, 06:00:23 UTC

Omg. Sweet and funny.

montellico October 9 2013, 19:15:56 UTC

haha glad you thought so, thanks for reading & commenting! :)

diamondacequeen May 13 2014, 18:40:15 UTC

I like the way that you write, so I'm commenting on some SHINee stuff now, lol. Sorry. I like the game that they play. The boys are all pretty funny the way that they talk to each other. And Ontae are so cute. I liked this because it was short and sweet, really. I think that simple little things like this are great because everything doesn't have to be long and drawn out to be great.