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montmorency

FIC: Broken Open - Part 3 (Adam/Tommy)

Feb 01, 2011 06:40

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kairi_01 February 1 2011, 13:00:41 UTC

Oh, angst, how I love you so. ♥

Your Tommy makes me want to shake him by the shoulders and yell at him to just tell Adam he needs space. *facepalm* Oh, boys. Keep up the great characterization!

montmorency February 2 2011, 04:26:23 UTC

Thanks for reading! Poor little Tommy :(

fara1903 February 1 2011, 13:12:01 UTC

Too much Adam, Tommy really? There's no such thing as too much Adam! I put out on the third date, LOL! You so want to put out on the first date, admit it, already!

montmorency February 2 2011, 04:27:22 UTC

There's no too much Adam. Can't be. And Tommy definitely wanted to put out at the first possible moment, but you can't always get what you want. :)

moodwriter February 1 2011, 13:18:29 UTC

OHMYGOD!!!! You are amazing. Your words are amazing. I know it's not the kind of story that's supposed to make you cry, but I am crying right now because your words are gorgeous, and I love you! Ooooh!!! So so so good. Exactly what I like. Everything I like. Warmth, closeness, witty comments, thoughtful... Ooooh!!

I'm just overwhelmed because I love it so completely. You!! What a writer you are.

Please write original fiction. I would read anything from you. *hugs*

montmorency February 2 2011, 04:30:12 UTC

You and your characterizations inspired me. I could cry a little bit at some of this story. Tommy must go through adversity before things get better.

I'll work on that original fiction. <3

((((hugs))))

wika_marcela February 1 2011, 13:33:48 UTC

Fantastic work. I like a little bit angst, and the conversation between Tommy and Monte. Too much Adam? Impossible :)
Oh Tommy ofc you want to put out, who wouldn't? But it would be easier to tell you need a little bit more time....

montmorency February 2 2011, 04:35:28 UTC

Tommy definitely wants Adam but he wants to make sure he doesn't hurt him. It's that straight-guy thing. If he's just bi-curious, that's not enough.

Thank you for the kind words. :D

fairfax_verde February 1 2011, 14:50:21 UTC

I love this so much, and now I'm going to be fascinated forever by the thought of Adam singing "Stand and Deliver."

montmorency February 1 2011, 15:14:13 UTC

Imagine Adam singing this: "What's the point of robbery when nothing is worth taking?"

And better yet : "I'm the dandy highwayman who you're too scared to mention."

In an interview Adam mentioned that he likes Adam Ant, so...!

<3

fairfax_verde February 1 2011, 21:24:45 UTC

Oh my gosh, that would probably kill me dead :)

I remember that interview, it was from his UK promo tour wasn't it? I squee'd pretty hard over it at the time.

montmorency February 2 2011, 04:38:00 UTC

I don't recall which, but he named a number of groups/artists he liked and it amused me to hear Adam Ant was one. He probably liked the way Mr. Ant dressed up - outlandishly!