FIC: Broken Open - Part 4 (Adam/Tommy)

[montmorency]

Comments

[maggy_97]

I really love this series! Love Adam waiting until Tommy's ready to let it get physical. It's so sweet, you can tell he really wants to, but is holding back for Tommy. And I love Tommy's confusion, he knows he wants, but seems to not trust himself.

Hope you post more soon! :)

[montmorency]

Thank you so much! I shouldn't put my own worries and fears on poor Tommy, it's keeping him from getting a lot of great sex.

[thrace_adams]

Aww, poor Tommy *giggles* but at least he took care of Adam too :) And then the morning after...Adam painting Tommy's toenails..that's awesome :) And I loved Tommy changing the tire. And the gig - oh I would have loved to have been there :)

[montmorency]

Tommy believes in fairness to a fault. Don't laugh at him! It's hard enough already, poor darling.

:D and <3

[cherub68]

Wow, great chapter. The gig and practise are brillliant with the band tension and the nerves. Then Tommy fantasising about Laurence of Arabia just too cute!

[montmorency]

Yay, thanks! Tension is great no matter where it comes from. That is, it's great in stories, not in RL.

Is that Tommy's hand in your icon (with Adam's)? I think it must be because Tommy always has his fingers curled around a pick. I love hand-holding. I love anytime they hold hands on stage. *sigh* I'm such a sap.

[moodwriter]

I'm laughing. I love you. I love this story. I love your boys. This is not a dream either. It's real and silly and sweet and heartbreaking and lovely and other wonderful adjectives. I adore you for writing. :D *hugs*

[montmorency]

Darling, I am so flattered by your words. How I wish it were not a dream! (Note to Tommy Joe Ratliff: Get it together, man. Adam's right there.

Hope your life is going well, leaving you some time and peace to write more. Because, not to pressure you, but I'm waiting anxiously. *drums fingers*

<3

[moodwriter]

Hahah, sorry. I've been writing original fiction for a change so fanfiction has been less active in my mind, but I just read what I've already written and... wheeee!! It works. I'll finish it this weekend at the latest. :D *hugs*

You're so so so wonderful. <3333 *hugs*

[pikespeak22]

I was happy to see an update. Loved the camaraderie of the band playing together (after their little ~family squabble) and nervous Tommy worried about date #3. The tire changing scene was so cute. Hahaha at Tommy's ~enthusiasm once Adam got his hand on him but it was cute he was worried about leaving Adam hanging. I have a feeling Tommy will remain convinced that there is no way that Adam's dick will fit in his ass until Adam's dick is actually in his ass. LMAO

[montmorency]

Thanks!!

I have a feeling Tommy will remain convinced that there is no way that Adam's dick will fit in his ass until Adam's dick is actually in his ass. LMAO

That's about the - ahem - size of it.