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Broken Open - Part 9b/9

Apr 09, 2011 13:19

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fritzie2a_t April 9 2011, 18:52:00 UTC

Say it ain't so ....not the end !!! Such a good story. So glad Tommy had that little break down before realizing the truth....that he belongs with Adam forever. So good !! Can't wait for the epilouge....need more !!

montmorency April 9 2011, 23:33:42 UTC

Every story needs a stopping point but that's not to say there won't be little peeks into their future now and then. I want to write some short stories, you know? Adam and Tommy-centric, naturally.

Thank you so much!

beccastl April 9 2011, 19:08:34 UTC

Awwwwwww.... such a wonderful ending to a wonderful story! So glad I checked my email and saw this was posted! So so sad that it's over, but I think it ended right where it should, with Tommy completely breaking open and understanding that this is really it. <33333 glad to see there will be an epilogue :) I hope you write more great stories like this! Thanks for this one.

montmorency April 10 2011, 02:14:41 UTC

I am so glad you found it! From the beginning I had the ending, but wandered hither and thither while looking for how to get to that end.

I'll definitely be writing more. Love these boys too much to stop.

Thank you for letting me know that you read and enjoyed this one! :D

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montmorency April 9 2011, 23:32:27 UTC

Thank you!

Okay, I'll make it a BIG epilogue. ;-)

The flowerpot thing is from my own family history. <3

howielove2101 April 9 2011, 19:16:00 UTC

Yay! I really enjoyed it. <3

montmorency April 10 2011, 02:15:43 UTC

Thanks for letting me know! I am most happy. :D :D :D

glitterwriter April 9 2011, 19:42:12 UTC

Such a sweet end and so perfect. The whole story is just perfect and it feels real because of all this moments of angst and doubts Tommy had. It's so good to read a fic which is working with the dark side of "guy is falling in love with a guy" thing. I can imagine how strange it must be when you never felt like this before. It's not everything bright and sunny. And you paint the picture perfect. Can't wait for the epilogue!

And I love the image of shadow of the supernova: "His shadow falls over Tommy and Tommy comes back to himself, here in the shadow of the supernova where he feels at home, safe." Perfect!

Hugs,
Katharina

montmorency April 10 2011, 02:52:27 UTC

Yes, exactly! It's not simple to get over years worth of thinking one way. Some people go through lots of doubt about their sexual orientation.

I'm so glad you like the supernova and shadow thing. Some people are just made for the spotlight and they love it and thrive in it. Others don't. Tommy and Adam nicely complement one another. Yay!

Thanks, sweetie! <3