I keep trying to write a good comment that doesn't end in "but I want Adam & Tommy to realize they should be together & live happily ever after". This will be my 3rd try -->
The story is really good. I loved the beginning & Tommy's thoughts on the $1000 home gigs. I was giggling at it so much. I liked how you went back & forth from one viewpoint to the other. I really liked how they are both wanting the other but don't realize it and how you wrote the angst so well. I also really like how you've put rl events in and the friendships with Monte, Sutan, etc. It's just a really well written story that makes me feel and I can hardly wait to read part 2..
and I want Adam & Tommy to realize they should be together & live happily ever after. :)
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God job!
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<3
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Thank you!!
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The story is really good. I loved the beginning & Tommy's thoughts on the $1000 home gigs. I was giggling at it so much. I liked how you went back & forth from one viewpoint to the other. I really liked how they are both wanting the other but don't realize it and how you wrote the angst so well. I also really like how you've put rl events in and the friendships with Monte, Sutan, etc. It's just a really well written story that makes me feel and I can hardly wait to read part 2..
and I want Adam & Tommy to realize they should be together & live happily ever after. :)
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Thanks for such a sweet comment, especially the final sentence. ;)
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