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montmorency

FIC: Lambliff Big Bang Part 4

Dec 24, 2011 04:15

Comments 87

arianne_maya December 27 2011, 02:00:42 UTC

Oh I love this.

You went so slow with the whole friendship turning into something else that it just feels natural, like it was supposed to happen all along. You also had me laughing, a lot; your Tommy is hilarious in his way of thinking, and the build-up to that last scene was so good that even just a hand-job was really hot.

Awesome, bb!

montmorency December 27 2011, 06:02:15 UTC

Thanks, that's such a nice comment. Friendship leading to love, that's how it happens sometimes. It was great to write such a happy fic.

<333

nocturnalfairy December 27 2011, 02:55:15 UTC

Love it!! And the artwork too! This could totally be continued. JS. ;)

montmorency December 27 2011, 06:03:13 UTC

Thanks! And yes re: artwork, Banbury's art really adds to the story. <3

Right now, the story is kind of continuing in my head, ya know? :D

nocturnalfairy December 27 2011, 15:23:44 UTC

Go with it!! ;)

montmorency December 27 2011, 17:02:50 UTC

LOL I'll take that under advisement. :D

rude_bunny December 27 2011, 21:25:00 UTC

This ended all too soon, probably my only problem with it! :P I'd love to see what happens to them next, Tommy coming to terms with things, their friends finding out and how their relationship is going to develop! It was fun and cute and really funny! Ravi made me laugh! Really liked this, even if it was far too short!

montmorency December 28 2011, 02:47:16 UTC

Aw, thanks bb! Maybe this could continue, I'll see how it feels later.

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zebrui December 28 2011, 01:13:26 UTC

Couldn't resist reading ;)
Really enjoyed it ♥ Tommy's POV was such an entertaining place to be at. Light and perfectly written. Absolutely yummy!

montmorency December 28 2011, 02:47:42 UTC

So glad you didn't resist :)

Thank you very much! <3

casey270 December 28 2011, 15:03:41 UTC

this was so much fun to read! i love the easy feeling it has. i love the characterizations, & most of all i love the way you tell a story.

you have the ability to explore and develop the plot without being overbearing. that's why i love your writing so very much <333

montmorency December 28 2011, 15:48:48 UTC

That is so so so sweet of you to say! It makes me feel like I have some possible ability to tell a story in a way that works.

Love your avi :)

<33333

casey270 December 28 2011, 16:07:59 UTC

avi is from roseyarts. she makes some amazingly emotional icons.

but i meant to use this one from michira_70

montmorency January 5 2012, 06:29:11 UTC

I love all the icons with that line :DDD