well seeing as sleep choose to forget me last night I actually waited for this chapter but was to tired to write anything I am really loving the story. Not sure I'll make it to midnight tonight but if I bribe you with chocolate could you slip me the link to the complete stir i promise not to tell. It is truely a great piece of work and i'm addicted XOXO
I like that you're letting the boys feel their way. Especially Tommy. Adam is like a big, gallumpy puppy, you know the ones that are all clumsy and floppy ears and you just wanna laugh and go 'awwww!'?
He's very much a big puppy here. Maybe that's why he's not a cat person LOL.
It's a challenge to show Tommy's character arc through Adam's eyes and POV and thoughts, rather than through Tommy's. If it's working, thank goodness for that.
Ohh, Ronette ! Just love that Tommy rescued her because no one wanted her. So sweet, but so sad. I know he was thinking about his own life when he kept her. Adam is so cute with his big old self,lol. He is just falling harder and harder. Glad he is just letting it play out slowly. I trust they will get there ! And Tommy is smiling. That makes my heart happy. Good chapter. Next !
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<3 for reading and being patient. THANKS!
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Enjoying your story very much!
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It's a challenge to show Tommy's character arc through Adam's eyes and POV and thoughts, rather than through Tommy's. If it's working, thank goodness for that.
<3
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Thanks so much. :D
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And this line... “You’re waking up,” he tells Tommy. “And the world is beautiful.”
What an amazing gut punch that was. Brought tears. :D
Big love for this chapter. I'm assuming the planets will line up for them soon.
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<3
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