Just a Thought

Aug 04, 2005 17:58


The alarm clock struck six,

The start of a normal day,

I hang with close friends,

But there’s nothing to say.

I need an adventure,

I need something new,

Someone who I,

Can always turn to.

But then there you were,

So plain to see,

But how could I get you,

To truly see me.

Everything about you drew me close,

But things you heard made your ( Read more... )

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missyhope16 August 4 2005, 16:38:07 UTC
wOw....did u write that?...if u did awesome stuff!!! let me guess who u wrote it for??? lol......shayne?.......well hope u feel better soon! i dont feel too well either cause i have a big history test tomorrow.....maybe a different kind of sickness hahaha....ttyl! ~amanda hope

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kg052007 August 5 2005, 18:29:41 UTC
hey Rae nice job on ur poem...its well written from a readers view and someone who loves poetry...yes i love poetry...and i told u i would start calling u Rae...well anyway good job and yea 5 guess who the poem is about...lol...well nice job

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petrifries August 6 2005, 14:44:59 UTC
only 1 guess who the poem's about. nice poem though, rach

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moodatood1 August 6 2005, 15:55:47 UTC
thanks for the comments...love yall!!! (you all)...kyles been a bad influence on my grammer. byebye!

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