[Fanfiction] Love with Trouble Chapter 3

[moonchild_luna]

Here you finally have it, the third chapter of Love with Trouble. I apologize for any mistakes.
Warning: Mentions of rape. Nothing graphic but still thought I'd mention it.

Comments

[naokosuki]

I do like your story! And I know you warned about a Rape, but Rape stuff makes me really upsets. I kind of wish it wasn't there. I know Yankumi isn't the most powerful person, but it made me so angry all day yesterday!!

Don't get me wrong though, I do love your Fic!! Thank you for writing it!!

[moonchild_luna]

First of all thank you for liking my story.
I know it can be upsetting, that's why I put the warning up. To tell the truth I thought a lot about whether to put it in or not, but it was the only thing I could think of that would actually be able to break Yankumi's spirit.
The next chapter will be up soon (I only need time to read it through and change any errors) and I hope that you will continue to like it.

[naokosuki]

Of course I'll keep reading it! I need to know how she gets saved, and she NEEDS to get saved!! >:D

[hyuuga_princess]

I liked how this was seeming to be longer and longer. I should be reading further but it's bedtime XD I'll read more tomorrow, you can expect my comments^^

[moonchild_luna]

Hi. I'm really sorry about the late reply, I'm been off LJ for a long time due to work and stuff. I'm happy that you liked my story.

Going to answer to another one of your comments here too since it's easier to take it all at once.
Making the characters more real was on purpose. I don't really like the idea of characters being "too" strong. Besides, I feel that the characters are pretty real as it is XD