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Till the Moon Hath Taken Flight - 3/3

Jul 03, 2013 18:05

Title: Till the Moon Hath Taken Flight
Characters: Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Owen, Tosh, Rhys, Rhiannon
Rating: PG-13
Beta: None due to time constraints - mistakes are all mine on this one
Summary: There is a secret buried within the files of Torchwood that Ianto Jones must keep hidden, one that could change everything.
A/N: Written for the jantocam June ( Read more... )

till the moon hath taken flight, faeries, jantocam

Comments 24

reddevilpoes July 4 2013, 18:08:59 UTC

That was gorgeous!!!!!
Loved every word!

moonfirefic July 4 2013, 19:49:10 UTC

Thanks so much.

Sorry for the delays. I literally had to post this three times last night for LJ to actually save it!

fide_et_spe July 4 2013, 18:47:42 UTC

I love that story, so sweet. I really enjoy your worldbuilding. Also nice fix it! Yay for Rhys.

moonfirefic July 4 2013, 19:55:37 UTC

Thanks!

I normally have the fabulous Milady Dragon Beta, so its a relief to hear that my ramblings and sometimes quirky word choices came across alright. I was originally going to infuse more Shakespeare, but it just didn't sound right so I left a few references and a quote and called it a day. :D

I really have a soft spot for Rhys. I kind of see him as the unsung hero/support man of Torchwood. He should be rewarded somehow; he definitely has his hands full with Gwen.

Thanks again for reading!

fide_et_spe July 5 2013, 22:13:20 UTC

I must check back, I didn't even pick up on the Shakespeare, duh, it's no doubt a prompt? I am even a Shakespeare fan who goes to the plays quite regularly, both in Stratford and London!! Shame on me!

Anyhow nice to have another story from you as always.

milady_dragon July 4 2013, 19:59:10 UTC

Unexpected icon is expected! *laughs*

This was fantastic. I loved it. And I love what you did to the Vagina of Doom! Of course anyone with a connection to the Earth is going to know it's there. What a way to handle that plot device!

And those last words to Gwen...yeah, let's hope she listens to them.

Brilliant, hon. Simply brilliant. :)

moonfirefic July 4 2013, 20:46:51 UTC

*Bows before the Beta Icon of Doom*
I forgot how awesome that icon is!

Glad you liked it. This is why I was asking about Miracle Day in chat. I never really watched it and the recaps are pretty vague as to whether the blessing is truly gone, so a bunch of faeries blasting it into oblivion just made sense.

As to Gwen - I really debated on leaving in a line where Ianto mentioned that Rhys and his daughter were settling in just fine, but I wasn't sure if that was actually a happy ending for him or not as he still loves her despite her flaws.

Self editing is a pain in the arse. Thanks again for all that you do!

bluelilacs July 4 2013, 20:26:32 UTC

Perfect ending to a wonderful story. I very much look forward to whatever your imagination may come up with next.

moonfirefic July 4 2013, 20:48:59 UTC

*blushes*

Thanks! It was really nice to actually finish something for the first time in ages. I'm signed up for Long Live Ianto Big Bang and Reel Torchwood so you will definitely be seeing more of my scribblings soon!

katwillow July 5 2013, 03:50:24 UTC

Fantastic. Thank you.

moonfirefic July 7 2013, 01:35:01 UTC

Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it.