Comments | moonjewel: yesterday in poetry class...

moonjewel

yesterday in poetry class...

Feb 27, 2008 09:46

"Well like, I really like this poem because like, well... like... it has a lot of good like descriptions. I mean like, she really like says a lot of good things, you know? Like when she used those like two opposite meanings for like the same word it really like made a lot of sense, you know? Like, I don't know, I just like really liked this poem."

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How it's supposed to work... chron_job February 27 2008, 15:05:27 UTC

"I really liked this poem because it made me want to find the author and commence to jungle fucking."

Re: How it's supposed to work... moonjewel February 27 2008, 15:12:24 UTC

YES!!!!!

exactly.

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moonjewel February 27 2008, 15:13:42 UTC

I'm an English major. It's painful.

:)

you nailed it with the 5th grade v-day or cliche angst... it's disappointing and frustrating. (and uninspiring)

czarcaustic February 27 2008, 16:11:47 UTC

Wow.

No really ... WOW!

I think fractured speech and grammar, on that scale, has actually transcended 'bad' and become a poetry of its own. Seriously, go back and read it without critical glasses.

I am of course completely bullshitting you, that was horrific!