forever, jaejoong's pov

Sep 02, 2009 23:54


yunho/jaejoong
oneshot; 630 words
fluff, bittersweetness, very slight angst
pg-13

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genre: angst, rating: pg-13, genre: fluff, length: oneshot, genre: bittersweet, pairing: yunho/jaejoong

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SPOT FOR moonkissedx September 2 2009, 16:03:17 UTC
sacchlovedbsk because bb, i love you ♥

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Re: SPOT FOR sacchlovedbsk September 6 2009, 16:35:20 UTC
me me me???? ^____________________________^
hehe!!! *glomps you*

god, this is portrayed so beautifully, and i have to say the thing that i love most about this piece is the images that you used and conveyed. why, you just painted a picture!! i could see, feel things so clearly that i feel like i'm an outsider watching over their shoulder...gah, you're getting better at this,bb!!

there's quite a numer of lines that leave deep impressions on me, but if i have to quote, this one is my fave!!:

you trace the outline of the sun, seeing it descend below the horizon, heart pounding as he plants small butterfly kisses onto your forehead.

this scene you imprint so deeply in you, your heart, your mind, your soul, it’s the definition of forever.

can you hear me go awwwwwww~~~??? ^__^

awh, crystal, thank you so much for this!!!!!! <3

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Re: SPOT FOR moonkissedx September 6 2009, 16:48:48 UTC
yes youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. ♥
/glomps back/

gah, thank you so much bb! ah :d that is such a huge compliment, ohmygodsun, really, kamsahamnidaaaaaa. i was kinda hoping you'd see something else other than what the other readers saw and you did, so thank you bb.

the lines you quoted, i edited them from the previous version, so i guess they're better than before, but omg, thank youuuuu.

you're welcome bb! but like i said in the email i sent you, it wasn't meant to be like this, i was supposed to write something brand new! not something that was transformed from another piece ): i'm so sorry bb. will get down to writing something for you very, very soon!

iloveyou ♥

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chunnie_fiera September 2 2009, 16:29:47 UTC
this is cute!!!
and ur note is cute too~~~
**winkies**

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moonkissedx September 2 2009, 16:32:10 UTC
ah, you are so fast! :DDD
hahaha, thank you! <3

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locofruitcake September 2 2009, 18:19:56 UTC
ahhh. it's during the (almost) perfect moments that insecurities hit us, no?

i love yunho's reply, because he doesn't sugar it up with untruths or flimsy promises, and just says it like it is <3

you know how sometimes you wish you could just freeze time? it felt like that when i pictured yunjae at the beach, bathed by the sunset

<33

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moonkissedx September 3 2009, 11:51:42 UTC
true, bb, true. i like how he replies because... he himself is not sure of whatever's going to happen, and he doesn't give jaejoong false hope. everyday i wish that time would freeze, but no, it doesn't stop for anyone. and i've always pictured them that way. :)

thank you! 8d

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burntmuffins89 September 6 2009, 13:58:59 UTC
Honeyyy, guh, I'm speechless. Plus, you know how incoherent I am right now. I absolutely cannot leave a proper comment right now but, gosh, it's beautiful, seriously (guh, look at those silent readers, your counter reads 218 right now)

Ilu bb, and remember our project (points to my icon & smiles cheesily) Hope it's successful! MUAHAHA

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moonkissedx September 6 2009, 14:33:14 UTC
bbbbbb, gah, speechlessness is definitely a greatgreatgreat compliment, especially if it comes from you. ♥ yes, i do know how incoherent you are! 8d it's okay bb, thank you so much. ahhhh, /bounces with joy/

i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ♥ and yes! i could never forget. hahaha, i love your icon, shoot, wants to take it. will go snag. it will be a success! you'll be the successful one and i'll be the fail one :/

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twnklsnowflake September 6 2009, 16:01:07 UTC
aww, this was lovely ♥
I...really don't know what else to say...I just loved it ;)

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moonkissedx September 6 2009, 16:07:36 UTC
gah thank you! ♥ i'm so glad you like it. and incoherency is a compliment, really. thank you so much. 8D

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