so don't you dare try and walk away; we'll get through this together - that i promise

Dec 26, 2009 23:26


a year ago in winter,
yunho/jaejoong, ot5; pg; romance, love; 878 w. in this part (number of parts unspecified)

after a year, has anything changed between us? (i think not; i still love you as much, maybe even more than before)

have a merry christmas; this piece is dedicated to the 5 boys who stole my heart and got away with it, happy 6th anniversary ( Read more... )

genre: romance, length: oneshot, genre: love, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: pg, pairing: ot5

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moonkissedx December 26 2009, 18:40:53 UTC
for u-knowiloveyou♥ really, bb, tysm for your kind words and all your help and editing, i really appreciate it. ily ♥

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u_knowiloveyou December 27 2009, 15:25:14 UTC
this was simple and sweet, you already know that. and i loved how you put in those little thought bubbles to portray their feelings; made it effective, impactive not that that's a word but yeah, you get the point ♥

your piece is unique because not alot of stories embrace the simplicity yours does. there are no big words or fancy terms. but that's the beauty of it, the way your words flow and out comes the emotions (i kinda forgot changmin's tearing on that day and reading this reminded me just how soft and vulnerable he really is. like how yoochun tries to comfort his younger brother - a pat to the back, a gentle touch - but there were tears in his eyes as well;)

it's never easy to have faith, isn't it? there's always hardship and suffering. but i promise you bb, this love will never fail. not when it's a friendship that surpasses all barriers - we're speaking the same thoughts, breathing the same air, and living one dream [jaejoong has a way with words, even when we do not expect it ( ... )

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moonkissedx December 27 2009, 18:17:48 UTC
tysm bb ♥ i like brackets with thoughts in them, they make everything so... real. and it's easier that way sometimes, it's more concise, heh. (lmao impactive = ♥)

gosh, really, thank you. i always used to think that big words were the thing, that they were the reason why good stories were good, but now i realise that the simplest of words are the best words to use because they are the most real. about changmin being soft and vulnerable, yes, he is, he just hides that behind his snark >D but... we all tend to forget how emotional our maknae is.

no, it is never easy to have faith and keep it. sometimes the pain's just too overwhelming and it's hard to sustain the same amount, same level of faith. but i know that in the end, we'll all get through this together. we're loving for a reason, that i'm sure we're sure of. and yes, not when it's a friendship that surpasses all barriers, not when we're all one big, big family with our hearts joined as one. i love that guy, he always cheers us up in ways we don't imagine him to ♥

no, thank ( ... )

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purpleinpink December 26 2009, 19:54:27 UTC
oh God. I still remember the joyous feeling of that moment last year. Time moves fast ;-;

thanks for sharing this. I heart the last line so much. <3
happy dongbang anniversary! ;)

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moonkissedx December 27 2009, 03:31:19 UTC
yeah, time really does fly, doesn't it? i was so excited last year, it just seemed so happy then. thank you for leaving such a wonderful comment! /squishes happy 6th anniversary to you too ♥

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byuldeureul December 26 2009, 20:30:01 UTC

[SCREAMS] THERE IS MORE? Omg, I didn't realize (because I didn't quite read all of the beginning note ahahaha /fails), but BB, I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE REST OF THIS *Tacklehugs* ♥♥♥

This was beautiful in and of itself (and makes my writing feel so very small in comparison D:) because I *completely* remember the feelings that I had been going through watching this for the first time last year, wanting to curl them all into a tight hug and never let them go; and to think before this, I was about to give up on 'boybands' forever??? Dong Bang Shin Ki truly are a miracle, and all the love they feel -- for their fans, for their music, for each other -- inspire me in a way I never thought was possible in all the time I spent before in fandoms and omg, now I'M tearing up like Changminnnie did during MKMF, whyyyyyyyyyy ;________; I could say so much more than this, but I shall refrain... |DDD ...if only because I still have to finish your YunJae, bb-love. ♥ But, seriously, I'm SO glad to see you back writing and here and as wonderful as ( ... )

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moonkissedx December 27 2009, 03:40:36 UTC
yeah there's gonna be more coming so look out, hahaha >D

/tacklehugs back ♥

tysm for leaving such an amazing comment love, and no way, your writing is so much better than mine. (lmao no one's reading this) it was really a joy when i watched it, emotions flowing through me and all, how proud i was of them. they're just so squish-and-hug-worthy ;; they really are special, the amount of love in them just never seems to end.

no, thank you so much for being so awesome!! i still owe you a thousand comments, meh :( i will write soon, promise. ily bb ♥

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su_dreams December 27 2009, 03:31:41 UTC
this is superb - i'm refraining from crying like a baby bawwwww. and the last sentence.. it's epic.

is there any reason to ditch them out in present situation? no, i don't think so, thank you.

cuz it's dongbangshinki yo~!

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moonkissedx December 27 2009, 03:43:10 UTC
omg, tysm ♥ ahh, don't cry ;; and yes, there is no reason to not stand by these amazing boys :') always keep the faith; it's like my motto nowadays. yeah, the rising gods of the east - they'll never fall, cause they'll always be there for us and with us. /hugs ♥

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su_dreams December 27 2009, 04:06:05 UTC
lmao sometimes i'm scared of the intensity of my love for them. XD

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moonkissedx December 27 2009, 15:07:39 UTC
haha, yes, i love them too much sometimes, and my friends are always like 'you're too in love with these guys, stop it, lmao' but i realise i can never stop. :l ;; these boys are too lovable; i can't not love them ♥

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livesmiling December 27 2009, 17:00:42 UTC
short but sweet <3

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moonkissedx December 27 2009, 18:08:39 UTC
tysm ♥

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