my heartbeat's blinding all my senses

[moonkissedx]

toki wo tomete (let's stop time)
yunho/jaejoong, romance
part i.

yunho wishes he can stop time but instead, time rewinds and he's trapped in the past.

a/n: may sound a little weird when reading. it's my first time trying this style out. i know it's a little mental but i was partially inspired by toki wo tomete. comments and concrit are greatly

Comments

SPOT!

[whitemoonx3]

MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE! HURRRR!

Re: SPOT!

[moonkissedx]

kay, yours! ♥

[haru_ran]

You tease~ I demand the next part of this! >______<
Oooooh~ and I'm sure Jae is the one calling. xDD

Hm~ a long lost love ........ wonder why they're not together before Yunho travels back in time. oO

[moonkissedx]

i am not a tease! i'll post the next part up tomorrow so look out for it ♥ and yes jae is the one calling. were they really not together before yunho goes back in time? you'll find out soon. :,) thank you for reading!

[haru_ran]

You are~ *pokes*hehehehehe*
Ha! I knew it! >:D
Ooooh~ I don't know. It sounded like he either lost him in some way or it was better back in the past. Don't ask me why. ><"

+YAYS+ Can't wait~ xD
Oooh~ just found your request post~ *kekekeke*
I'll think about something nice~ :3&hearts

[moonkissedx]

i am not :( mm, maybe. you'll get to know~ :,D oh but i haven't fulfilled anything from there since i posted it D: but i'll write your plot for you, hun ♥

[byuldeureul]

Hngggggh, as usual, your exquisite word choice and heartbreakingly beautiful prose-like style leave me breathless, bb. ♥

I'm excited to see where this will go. :] Can't say much yet, as I realize you haven't really said much about where YunJae are / what they're doing / where they'll go. But I'm excited >w< and I can't wait to see what this idea of yours becomes!

Thanks for sharing and I seriously can't WAIT to see what you come up with next, Crystal-ah. :D

[moonkissedx]

:,D ♥ thank you, kei-bb. mm i'm glad you're excited! guess. maybe you'll get it right 8D

your exquisite word choice and heartbreakingly beautiful prose-like style leave me breathless = ♥, tysm sweetheart.

but i'd love to see your comments on the second part of 'a year ago in winter' though, need to know your thoughts about it ;=; thank you for reading, bb!

[byuldeureul]

Yayyyyy, will be waiting, then. :'] My guess...hmmmm, my guess is that it relates to their current situation & that Yunho is thinking about how they're separated yet connected by something like love? (Again, I'm not expecting to be right LOL but that was my take on it :DD)

'Welcome, precious. :'>

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh, I never did comment on that, did I?! /slaps self Stupid me >.< I did read it, darling; I just forgot to leave a note...I'll go do that ASAP, okay? ♥ And no problem - I drop everything when I see writing from you, bb, and you know how much I adore you & everything you do~~ *w*

[shuuseieki]

CRYSTALLLLLL ♥
First things first, I haven't heard from you in so long; I missed you. ;w; Anyways, your writing style never fails to blow me away. I loved how you used vague hints and little pieces here and there to express the depth of Yunho's feelings. It amazes me how you can use so few words yet thoroughly express what you want to - it blows a hole in me, it does. I know I make no sense here right now, but I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, BB.

[moonkissedx]

CHELSEAAAAAA ♥ oh gosh, i'm so sorry for not replying your email and things like that :( school's really busy nowadays and i just don't seem to be able to find the time to just sit down and write anything at all. i missed you too! ;~; thank you so much ♥ i'm glad you can see the depth of his feelings; i was really trying to convey that :,) ahhh, thank you so much really. you're too sweet ;;

I LOVE YOU TOO BB ♥

[shuuseieki]

Ohno, please, please don't apologize over something as trivial as that! I completely relate in terms of RL stress and obligations; I'm pretty packed with activities myself, and I'm finding it hard to stay afloat of this fandom and my online network.

YOU'RE SWEETER AND I LOVE YOU MORE THAN YOU CAN EVER LOVE ME. ♥

[psronnie]

This is really short! It feels like it just got started and then it ends. Lol