but if we just believe, there's no way we can fall;

Apr 26, 2010 00:36


a year ago in winter,
yunho/jaejoong, slight ot5; pg; romance, love; 1,014 w. in this part (part three; edited)

after a year, has anything changed between us? (i think not; i still love you as much, maybe even more than before)

a/n: i'm sorry i took such an awfully long time to write this, i've been so tired lately. but i tried really hard to make ( Read more... )

genre: romance, length: oneshot, genre: love, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: pg

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moonkissedx April 25 2010, 17:38:30 UTC
for su_dreams♥; thank you for all your sweet words, bb. have a great birthday & i hope you'll continue to be happy throughout these tough times. they'll be okay. :)

happy birthday ♥

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/dies in sweet pain/ su_dreams April 26 2010, 18:59:17 UTC
thanks for the wish, i hope we'll all be happy regardless of how tough things can be yes? &hearts

and OMG THE YUNJAE-NESSSSSS i may not be the biggest YJ shipper but i've always loved the subliminal message, gestures they've always shown and this piece did nothing but highlight that sweetness that made my tooth ached with sugary goodness and painful torture at the same time-

ok. i'm babbling. my point is that this is &hearts

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Re: /dies in sweet pain/ moonkissedx April 28 2010, 15:46:31 UTC
you're very, very welcome hun :) and yes, please be happy even though times are difficult! i'm sure the boys won't be happy to see us upset because of them.

haha, yeah i figured from the overuse of their names. ngh i love how they interact and just love silently yet obviously. (does this even make sense?)

thank you, bb! i'm glad you liked this ;;♥

happy birthday once more; you had the right to babble, no worries :))♥

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haru_ran April 25 2010, 17:51:43 UTC
*sighs happily*
Gosh, Crystal bb, that is really beautiful and I could read it again and again. &hearts

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moonkissedx April 28 2010, 15:47:34 UTC
//sighs along with you

thank you bb, but sadly no one really read this so ;~;

but nevertheless, thank you for always being here for me ♥ read this as many times as you like. :))

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haru_ran April 28 2010, 16:35:35 UTC
Aaaw~ my poor Crystal bb. D: *hugs you*
*haha* I will, hun. &hearts

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areyouwet April 25 2010, 17:57:46 UTC
Oh god this is touching, warm, beautiful. You seriously took my breath away. They are going through tough times, but, everything will be okay.

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moonkissedx April 28 2010, 15:49:33 UTC
if i could take your breath away, that means that i really made an impact (i hope i did!) and you made my day, bb! ♥ i know they are but in the end, i'm sure we'll all get through this safely. thank you so much for reading ♥

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moonkissedx April 28 2010, 15:49:59 UTC
thank you :D ♥

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u_knowiloveyou April 27 2010, 13:51:03 UTC
i liked these lines:

Yunho sees all this.
him being Uknow Yunho and all. there're some things he's pretty obliv about yet he still knows despite all that absent-mindedness, lol. i don't know where i'm going with this but it fits (perfectishly).

It was going to be their night if they won; it was going to be their night if they didn’t, they told themselves.
wow that. that's just like dong bang shin ki. they rise and they carry on. they fall and they carry on. ♥

ahh, and then there was HUG. first year. first debut song. first yunjae scandal. had alot of firsts in it. makes me miss them more :') you should write more of this stuff, bby. absence makes the heart grow fonder, and your fics do just that /elloveeyee

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moonkissedx April 28 2010, 15:58:17 UTC
;; i'm, um, speechless.

him being Uknow Yunho and all.
really. i was sort of trying to show that he knows, he really does.

that's just like dong bang shin ki.
gosh. um. you know, no one quoted this line to me. but it was one of my favourite lines in the entire piece. really. i'm not joking. i'm glad you could feel the realness of them in this... i was hoping someone'd see how real they are and how i try to portray them. thank you bb.

and yes, hug. i was thinking of how special it would be to include their very first song in this because you know, they're the top and they've just won the best album award and it'd be good to /insert nostalgia. and through the song, take time to remind ourselves of how much they've grown and how much they've progressed and climbed all these years.

i miss them too. ;~; thank you so much, bb! i'm... happy you think so. (/elloveeyee? what's that hahaha) ♥ :))

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