This can't end well.

Feb 10, 2011 16:43

Transcribing this via cellphone in desperate need to get it online. Pardon the the grammatical and spelling mistakes ( Read more... )

original fiction, origin, potage de lune, ether

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artificialpuppy February 10 2011, 22:27:36 UTC
A Pantheistic Sect, of something, concerns itself with which God and finds Aether, which is a Medium present when all earthly bodies and elements are extracted and from which such might be extracted, on a Mountain and does what with it?

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moonlady3000 February 11 2011, 03:27:56 UTC
Ahh, yeah. Maybe the use of the word sect is inappropriate. Or at least unnecessary.

It should probably just be The Pantheists. Which - in the real world anyway - are (according to the Catholic Church) heretics that believe God is in nature and in everything tangible.
Or rather Pantheism is the name of that heresy...

Also I should make it more clear that this is something like when the church had governing power over most parts of Europe.

This was all supposed to be rather vague and so it assumes a lot I guess.

Also, I thought it was fairly clear that they were trying to validate their viewpoints to the church that god IS in eveything and that they were likening the Ether to God. Though if I wasn't clear enough on those first parts then I guess that wouldn't have made sense.

But you've made a good point on the parts I should reword and clarify. Thanks.

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