Short story for English --- Should I leave it as is or continue on for a bit and wrap it up more?

[moonlitpearlsea]

Carlos had opened the bag to reveal a rather sparkling discovery. Diamond necklaces, diamond rings, diamond bracelets, all shimmering in the warm morning light. The office ceiling and walls were a beautiful sight, as a thousand rainbows parading as prisms of light danced around the room.

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[lockability]

HAHAHA I LOVE IT! :D

[moonlitpearlsea]

added about a paragraph more and stuff. What do ya think??

[lockability]

Forget just wrapping it up, you should totally write a full series with this plot hehe. :D And then sell the movie rights and make a couple of those!