[Poetry] when the dreamers fall...

Sep 11, 2008 06:18

when the dreamers fall peacefully ( Read more... )

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amnesictouch September 11 2008, 14:31:48 UTC
Aish~ You AND Bella both have such talent with poetry.

...I usually go through and pick out my favorite stanza to quote, but... I just really like all of it. o_o

You just really hit everything with your words. This part here:

untouched and untainted by our limitations,
the inner desires shall shine ever so clearly.

So true. xD If I ever dream, it's something I'm currently very passionate about, whether I want to admit it or not. So when I dream about someone/something, I know it's something I really want. D:

You have such beautiful wording. <3 I wish you'd write more often. xD I love reading your stuff.

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amazing ♥ sayuri_chung September 12 2008, 01:55:42 UTC
akumi-chan~♥ i really like this poem :D u should write more o^^o your stanzas ur whole poem~ is beautiful =] i cant wait till you write more ^_~ its absolutely amazing ^-^ i rele like the ending stanzas.. those like clicked into my heart XD

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