[Warm Snow] [Moon Sergeant] [Wood is Very Absorbent]

[moonsergeant]

Title: Wood is Very Absorbent
Summary: How they met, and what came after.
Rating: T (for profanity)
Notes: Deo/Ada. Ada-centric. Written for iu_fanfiction  WC #34 | Cacoethes.
Disclaimer: Deo belongs to neko11lover  (Thanks for help with his character!) , Val belongs to mizumi888 , and Meg belongs to arahvista .
Warning: A very long fic. Originally 26 pages when opened in MS Word, Tahoma size

Comments

[neko11lover]

FINALLY! IT'S DONE! OH WOW WHERE DO I START. Let me number my thoughts so I won't forget anything.

1. I realized that I've misunderstood a lot of parts ;___; Like the time lapses from the past to the future. They were nicely inserted.

2. OH MY GOD WHY IS IT THAT WHEN YOU WRITE DEO HE SOUNDS SO TERRIBLY COOL? Why is it that when I use him, he just seems like a dorky, awkward, skinny kid who doesn't know what to do with his life? I love how you hold the characters - you do so in a way that you have this firm grip on their original personalities, but at the same time, you give them your own kind of 'color'. IDK HOW TO PHRASE IT PROPERLY BUT THERE

3. ADA Y U SO COOL? As I've told you before, the hospital scene really shook me. You have a way with emotions - you don't feed it to the audience, but you show it, which I think is good writing, really

I love this so much ;u; Thank you for writing this!

/memd

[moonsergeant]

OH MY. OHH MY, THANK YOU! This means a lot, coming from you. ;u;

Ahaha! BUT DEO IS COOL. I'm glad I was able to understand his character with your help! Thanks for helping me get things right. And sorry about the time lapses. They're my thing. /LOLOL GIRL WHO LEPT THROUGH TIME

I'm glad you liked it! ;u;