Comments | moonsheen: [fic][baccano!] Firo Falls Off A Building

moonsheen

[fic][baccano!] Firo Falls Off A Building

Jul 20, 2010 21:48

More Baccano!, pre-series. 966 words.

( Firo, Age 11, Seeks To Better Himself, Falls Off A Building, Meets Interesting People. )

r-rail tracer?!, fic, baccano!

Comments 13

dyxlisa July 21 2010, 04:21:58 UTC

AHH omg, this makes me so happy!! Little Firo!! CLAIRE!! I love how fast Claire just took to Firo and now they're...well, whatever it is it's ADORABLE.

Uh here from twitter rec. /friends you

byzantienne July 21 2010, 12:10:41 UTC

I love this so much. The voice you've got for bitty!Firo is gorgeously fun~

miss_arel July 21 2010, 22:29:51 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwawwawawwawawwaaaaawwwww [garbles incoherently]

so cuuuuuuuute bitty Firo! still bitty but not quite as bitty Claire! Love love love <3 Their voices are just perfect.

the_k_box July 25 2010, 08:26:47 UTC

I hope you don't mind me popping in randomly, but I loved this. <3 It was really enjoyable both as Baccano! fanfiction, and just as a piece of writing (since I have only a vague knowledge of the series). It's difficult to write scrappy little boys convincingly, but you pulled it off really well!

ningen_demonai August 7 2010, 21:39:33 UTC

Oh Firo! Oh Claire! I love this look at them pre-series SO HARD. ♥