Dejected

[moonsiren]

Lately Katie had been noticing that her life was going nowhere. She wasn't really sure about whether that bothered her enough or not yet, but she realized that her life was a dead end at this point. She would log on to the internet and stare at the google main page blankly, wondering in some corner of her mind if she should do something. Well, she

Comments

Great transition and sentence variety, but...

[anonymous]

You forgot a comma or two, m'dear.

-Chickabiddy

Re: Great transition and sentence variety, but...

[moonsiren]

Yeah, I'm not very good with commas. I like to add them here and there for the heck of it. One day I'll get the hang of it. One day I'll also learn how to fly, so we'll see how that goes. Thanks for the read, have a nice day.

[miss_kitsy]

If you ever check back here... Figure out who this is.
She might miss you.